أنظرو الى ابداع ثانية لغات ثانوية السحن بالقرارة

[غرداوي]

ثانوية السحن بالقرارة جديدة و اول طلبتها العام الماضي وقد اعجبني كثيرا حبهم وابداعهم خاصة في المادة التي ادرسها

افتمنى من الاساتذة ان تحلو لهم هذه القصيدة كما راقت لي والتي شاركوا فيها كلهم وهم حوالي 15 تلميذا:

المقطع الاول (Stanza1) : بلمزوزي سمية + بن شويحة حنان

المقطع الثاني (Stanza2) : حمايمي ام كلثوم + ربروب ام الخير

المقطع الثالث (Stanza3) : حبي لامية + بن مازوز بشر + تريعة محمد مولاي + سبقاق السعيد

المقطع الرابع (Stanza4) : جعيدير عبير + ربروب الزهرة + ربروب سميرة وصباح

الاخير (Stanza5): عمارة عمار + بوداقي بوبكر+ ربروب الطيب ومساعدة الاستاذ

Down with prejudice

Do you think a woman can be strong and tall?
Do you think she can be a fighter or a diver ?
Do you think she can be a builder or a farmer ?

Do you think a man can be pretty and small ?
Do you think he can have a long hair ?
Do you think he can live without the air ?

Do you think the elderly people can be rude ?
Do you think they can play games and be wise ?
Do you think they can run away to win a prize ?

Do you think the young can be young and wise ?
Do you think the can drive in the traffic ?
Do you think they can be romantic ?

If you do so, the you deserve my hat
Or we share the same flat
For your prejudice is as blind as a bat

[sihem milo]

i don't think so

[just cause]

This is pretty My Teacher Thank You

[maram 14]

Wow This is a pretty

[sigaafateh]

nice work but u jhave to pay attention to rythm

[غرداوي]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة sihem milo

i don't think so

First,you are free to think or to shring

Second, I am a teacher and my job is to appreciate and encourage all the jobs of non native speakers

and my little group are in an urgent need to bestow that over their lttle minds. All in all , your judgemental distructive criticsm is not accepted in our school and if I were your teacher , I would punish you for your misbehaviour. Thus, try to be aware of your distructive critics as the are likely to hurt the other's feelings

last but not least, my group followed the stanza
A
b
b

A
b
b

and this acceptable in poetry


My thanks to all the other encouraging replies

[Bishaaa]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة غرداوي

ثانوية السحن بالقرارة جديدة و اول طلبتها العام الماضي وقد اعجبني كثيرا حبهم وابداعهم خاصة في المادة التي ادرسها

افتمنى من الاساتذة ان تحلو لهم هذه القصيدة كما راقت لي والتي شاركوا فيها كلهم وهم حوالي 15 تلميذا:

المقطع الاول (Stanza1) : بلمزوزي سمية + بن شويحة حنان

المقطع الثاني (Stanza2) : حمايمي ام كلثوم + ربروب ام الخير

المقطع الثالث (Stanza3) : حبي لامية + بن مازوز بشر + تريعة محمد مولاي + سبقاق السعيد

المقطع الرابع (Stanza4) : جعيدير عبير + ربروب الزهرة + ربروب سميرة وصباح

الاخير (Stanza5): عمارة عمار + بوداقي بوبكر+ ربروب الطيب ومساعدة الاستاذ

Down with prejudice

Do you think a woman can be strong and tall?
Do you think she can be a fighter or a diver ?
Do you think she can be a builder or a farmer ?

Do you think a man can be pretty and small ?
Do you think he can have a long hair ?
Do you think he can live without the air ?

Do you think the elderly people can be rude ?
Do you think they can play games and be wise ?
Do you think they can run away to win a prize ?

Do you think the young can be young and wise ?
Do you think the can drive in the traffic ?
Do you think they can be romantic ?

If you do so, the you deserve my hat
Or we share the same flat
For your prejudice is as blind as a bat

I just Love it *o* WoW !!

[نميرة 08]

Good job !!

[nabil.algeria]

nice but no rhyme

and take attention there are some mistakes in writing

[RIMA19]

good job
thanks
good luck

[sara-sarora]

waw think you

[fafafoufou]

thannnnnnnks