مساعدة صغيرة ....اريد تصحيح

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مرحبا اريد مساعدة طلب منا استاذ الانجليزية ان نقوم بكتابة سيرة ذاتية انا ضعيفة قليلا في الانجليزية ساريكم ما قمت به لكني اريد نصائح او تصحيح وجزاكم الله

grigori rusputin

grigori rusputin the holy man and the mad monk was a russian mystic adoctor and an advisor he was born 1986 into a russian peasant family in asmall village his mother died when he ws born

this great man impressed many people with his knowledge he cured the son of nicholas 2 by using the hypnois so as asirprise he becameth advisor to the romanovs but also he nicholas became the clandestine political of csar nicholas
he died from drowing into the icy neva river 1916 and some people said that his death was afactor in the fall of russia