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قديم 2011-12-01, 21:10   رقم المشاركة : 1
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M001 For: Karim_Rap_4_life ^.^



My Life
.
.
.

need a few time to realize
a few minutes to describe
an acking heart
yeah...i guess it's mine!

hello i'm speaking

nobady's hearing
but..never mind people
i'll always keep saying

Now feeling so much pain

but don't worry
easy to healing
don't try to put me down
cause i'll never give up on my own
strong enough to fix it
lonely but not alone

everybody is screaming

need to dreaming
writing silently
feeling perfectly
creating dreams
building ways

the way i think

nobady's get
simple ideas
but difficult to mestand

this is my life

so please don't come
i'm on my own
feel so much calme
dreaming,hoping,loving
doing what ever i want

i don't need your help

cause i know that i'm strong enough
to stand up again
without any hand
catch me then say
hey dud you remeber
i'm the one who made you
breathe again

oh come-on people

don't fool me more
cause i know some of you
don't know me at all
and for them i'll say
don't try to do
cause you'll wish
never know me
before this time

now i'm letting you go

cause i won't give you
more then that face
to preuve anything
exept my view

.

.



I 've Answered You On the one
you wrote it once to me
.

i know it's not beautiful as yours but
.
.
i tried

=)



Thank you again

^.^

اقتباس:
Friends of mine all are gone
they left me alone so the pain is done
yes i'm living lonely on my own
hey i gave you my heart' crown
my heart to you was always open
who can stand next to me and listen
deceivig in these world always happen
It was the thing that make me frighten
with you friend I used to be fine
I give you one more chance to combine
I'm waiting for you, forgiveness is my sign






.



i Don't know if i went there
i mean your life
but i knew you from the way
you wrote
.
not all
but some

sot tell me....

how you found it ?

^.^








 


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قديم 2011-12-02, 13:44   رقم المشاركة : 2
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Mh47

no need to guess
people don't bless
make them confess
cause them to stress
you a damn Strong Girl enought to depress
your life is yours
when you're speaking to
get no one keep listening
you know why
they have a dirt in their ears that's why
when you say Hi they won't say hi
pain is the aim to raise your gain
Life is a game
If acclaim the pain
No no one came
if you have a fame
on you they will be insane
they stack on your nail
understand what i'm saying
get them to your attention payin

you just like who i am the same way you look at life Oh! Damn that's the most amazing thing that happened to me righ here that's kind of darkness side hahaha just like the darkness on my maind the part that is too strangeous to me is " i don't need your help" you a damn Girl You're so strong hahah I believe from the way you look at the world "oh come on people" it just like hey you people
don't be foolish haha i will wheap your head "people don't come" that words get me beating my head on my desk you know i though that i'm one people so i'm not invited because that girl is keeping to say you're not welcome tomy life hahahah you so funny girl and that kinds of works are aggressive I like this kind of works really i appreciate them because when you say to someone you're welcome and I adore your attention it will be the diverse why because these Life itself is a diverse? people seem good but they are just playing on you!!! keep saying I'm the best and damn to the rest this is my life but in a matter i don't agree with you a little bit exactly when you say "i don't need your help" I know there are too many people will count it as a game
Yes a remember where and how you used to be without me you're azero but still a good people who have a hot hearts and pure brains I mean they are ready todo the job!!! don't be displeased or hopeless aha Girl......you were wrong when you say it's not beautiful for me it is good keep on that level. good luck









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قديم 2011-12-02, 14:32   رقم المشاركة : 3
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افتراضي

hhhhhh
You said a lot
but i can get it

yes i went to far
i know....
hhhhhh

But don't worry
i get your words

>.O

Peace

^.^










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قديم 2011-12-02, 14:35   رقم المشاركة : 4
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افتراضي

Ps :

اقتباس:
no need to guess
people don't bless
make them confess
cause them to stress
you a damn Strong Girl enought to depress
your life is yours
when you're speaking to
get no one keep listening
you know why
they have a dirt in their ears that's why
when you say Hi they won't say hi
pain is the aim to raise your gain
Life is a game
If acclaim the pain
No no one came
if you have a fame
on you they will be insane
they stack on your nail
understand what i'm saying
get them to your attention payin


I like it
Sooooooo Much

Thank You
^.^









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قديم 2011-12-02, 15:43   رقم المشاركة : 5
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Bounce

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[LEFT] i Don't know if i went there
i mean your life
but i knew you from the way
you wrote
.
not all
but some

[SIZE=4][COLOR=DarkSlateBlue] sot tell me....

Please I need an answer ....These part are confusing to me I haven't 't understood










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قديم 2011-12-02, 16:10   رقم المشاركة : 6
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افتراضي

No it's not a part
of the words i wrote
No..
i just told you that

i don't know if i was right
by this words

and ok
you' answered me

thx...

^.^










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قديم 2011-12-02, 16:12   رقم المشاركة : 7
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افتراضي

i've told you that
i wrote this
from the way you write

it's all
p:










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قديم 2011-12-02, 17:44   رقم المشاركة : 8
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افتراضي

yeah I know that's not a part of your writing...........thank you for your reply thank you 3 times hahaa










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قديم 2011-12-02, 19:59   رقم المشاركة : 9
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افتراضي

hhhh...
You're Always Welcome more than 3 times too


lol

^.^










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قديم 2012-03-21, 20:09   رقم المشاركة : 10
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