Thirsty for love

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Title:

Thirsty for love

By:

Karim Cherifi

I was lost in my thought

in the lonliness that I got

Psut Psut psut

Karim rim im m

Above the rim im m

suddenly I heared soft voice

I tried to not make a noise

I just kept the poise

because I had no choise

I did decide to look inside

Nothing I recognized

My mind was my guide

Told me to not hide

I went outside

The place was wide

Going through the eastside

or the westside

I had to know

where I should Go

But I didn't know

The voice is calling again

An open Gate eit...eit...eit

I Compensate

Karim celibrate eit...eit...eit

A beautiful Lassie eventually

She was running so quickly

I followed her to the party there

I had to enter there were no garder

An incredible so nice Girls were there

I can't compare

I asked but no one care

they kept to stare

I went upstair

I got her Disapear

I beg her to Reapear

I felt her so near

I just found Her nice smell

I stand on the wall I could fall

I couldn't controll

I still recall

The smile She drew

before She had to go

I walked throught the door

Among the lassies dancing on the floor

Shouting Mr Romance Romance

Please give us one more chance

I didn't take a glance

It would be a bad consequence

avoiding the previous Instance

I saw Marcedece Bense

Some one pushed me in

She was there again saying

I'm here to move the pain

I give you the love you abstain

No more time to complain

Forget the pain you did obtain

I felt so happy and insane

I can't believe this

a world of fantasy

A soft voice saying my name

for one more time

I exclaim she is with me

so who is calling me?

Get up get up son

it's time to go home

A nurse waking me up

to walk home

she said

It was a hard crisis

be patient stay strong

try to forget her she is a deciever

she don't even consider

[تابتي]

belle parole karim

[maymay]

I guess that one took you more than 30 mn

it s a nice one,keep up the good work

just a question,does it mean that you were sleepin and all that was a beautiful dream?or what?perhaps i dont get you right!

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة maymay

I guess that one took you more than 30 mn

it s a nice one,keep up the good work

just a question,does it mean that you were sleepin and all that was a beautiful dream?or what?perhaps i dont get you right!

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees it was a dream ofcourse but in a hard day of my life and the story telling some facts about my life

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة تابتي

belle parole karim

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuu

[newflower]

tooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet
I like it
u knw what start t addict ur writings and words
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

[maymay]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Karim_Rap_4_life

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees it was a dream ofcourse but in a hard day of my life and the story telling some facts about my life

well,I hope your life would be as beautiful as that dream

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة newflower

tooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet
I like it
u knw what start t addict ur writings and words
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Flower

[ilina 07]

amazing poem karim as usuall..keep on writing freind cause your poems are great...ohh i almost forgot Happy New Year wish you all the best,success and of course a lot of love

[حكاية قلب]

Words Well Chosen
Sweet Honest Words
.
Bad Conclusion
><

But Still Good Poem
^p:
Keep On Karim
You are So Good
^.^

My Best Wishes

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ilina 07

amazing poem karim as usuall..keep on writing freind cause your poems are great...ohh i almost forgot Happy New Year wish you all the best,success and of course a lot of love

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii....thank you My friend for passing I hope you like it........Thank youoooooooooooooooooooooooooooou

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة shin hyun

Words Well Chosen
Sweet Honest Words
.
Bad Conclusion
><

But Still Good Poem
^p:
Keep On Karim
You are So Good
^.^

My Best Wishes

yes yes yes thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu__good luck to you too my friend

[rock-girl46]

beleive me i feel the same way.......happy new year2012

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة rock-girl46

beleive me i feel the same way.......happy new year2012

yeah thank you the fact I did it the same because I feel that I share it with some ones who live the same case and that's so sad pffff dreams ha ha meet a nice girl and when you wake up you find nothing but pain?

[malak-023]

were you in th hospital but really a great poem