Twenty Three to Twenty Four!!!!!

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

personal reason.....I feel that it's not legal sayings and it's a satire on my life

[ilina 07]

waww i'm really impressed....this is amazing...i especially love this part

Every body is running but half of them are not looking

what's going on in this Damn Bad life!

I tell you no one care for you

Your life is yours my life is mine

you're so late so look for the line

People walking away just to be far away

All for one...One for all I was told... great job and inchallah you'll live to see 24..god bless you my freind

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Illllliina thank you my Friend

[حكاية قلب]

Nice writing Karim
i Love how u Wrote this words
expecially

All for one...One for all I was told

Black white yellow if you young or old

Karim is here to let you know

and u used a nice beginning

As I walk throught the valley of shadow of death

I take a look at my Life and realize there's not much left

That my maind is gone the cowards are so strong

/
/
But remeber u re not alone in this damn case
u know ><
hhhhh
and u're not alone too in the day of ur birthday
in cases i forgot or i wont be able to say it

*

Happy Birthday
all the life inShallah
^.^


Ur Friend

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة shin hyun

Nice writing Karim
i Love how u Wrote this words
expecially
and u used a nice beginning

/
/
But remeber u re not alone in this damn case
u know ><
hhhhh
and u're not alone too in the day of ur birthday
in cases i forgot or i wont be able to say it

*

Happy Birthday
all the life inShallah
^.^


Ur Friend

yeah Girl thank you
I just want to inform you that ....."one for all all for one " is a proverbe and I just write it here it's not mine

[حكاية قلب]

yeah Girl thank you
I just want to inform you that ....."one for all all for one " is a proverbe and I just write it here it's not mine

No i know but i Queted
all the one

All for one...One for all I was told

Black white yellow if you young or old

Karim is here to let you know

what I say is how I feel so leave me alone

i dnt know why it showed
like that

^^

[مراهقة مستكشفة]

wow I was looking how old are you and I think I found it in your poem hey you have a talent i saw your poems man why don't invest it I encourage you maybe when you become a great rapper or a great writer you will remember that I encouraged you hhhhh whatever keep up the good work

[سآجدْ للهْ]

|||ردد معي|||~~~|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||أكبر|||
|||~~~|||~~~|||~~~اللهم ارزقنا الجــــــــــــــنه امين
|||ردد معي|||سبحان|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||وبحمده|||

good writer

felicitousy

|||ردد معي|||~~~|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||أكبر|||
|||~~~|||~~~|||~~~اللهم ارزقنا الجــــــــــــــنه امين
|||ردد معي|||سبحان|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||وبحمده|||

[newflower]

aaaawsm karim....I m glad to hear or see from u these thorough meanings my brother

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مراهقة مستكشفة

wow I was looking how old are you and I think I found it in your poem hey you have a talent i saw your poems man why don't invest it I encourage you maybe when you become a great rapper or a great writer you will remember that I encouraged you hhhhh whatever keep up the good work

yeah yeah yeah thank you Girl.......But I prefer to share it with djelfa forum's members that's all

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة okbavvd019

|||ردد معي|||~~~|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||أكبر|||
|||~~~|||~~~|||~~~اللهم ارزقنا الجــــــــــــــنه امين
|||ردد معي|||سبحان|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||وبحمده|||

good writer

felicitousy

|||ردد معي|||~~~|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||أكبر|||
|||~~~|||~~~|||~~~اللهم ارزقنا الجــــــــــــــنه امين
|||ردد معي|||سبحان|||~~~|||الله|||~~~|||وبحمده|||

Yeah thank you man for your encouraging and passing thank you one more time

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة newflower

aaaawsm karim....I m glad to hear or see from u these thorough meanings my brother

Yeah yeah yeah.....Thank you Flower