my first poem♥♥♥

[amouna23]

IF
IF I TELL YOU HOPE
WILL YOU KNOW IT is

If I tell you love
Will you think of me

If I tell bird
Will you look at me

I will be here, I will be there
So please, wait for me

O’peace

[حكاية قلب]

I like it Go On Giiiirl
its so Sweet honestly

^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

I liked it too Girl just look forward and work...learn from the poems you read you'll be the best definetly and don't be discouraged we support you here....and all the good members of the djelfa forum Inchallah

[Natali3]

Hi,,,, every one

well ,,, my sis i think it is simple words
but in the same time is well done

I am waiting your 2 nd poem ....ok

see you dear

[سارة1995]

Masha'a Allah
Fantastic ! SISTER
Keep going without stopping

[amounabba]

[]Never say I love you, if you don’t really care..
.never talk about feelings, if they aren’t really there…
never touch a life, if you mean to break a heart…
never say you’re going to, if you don’t plan to start…
never look me in they eye, when all you do is lie…
…never say hello, if you really mean good-bye]]]

[amouna23]

Thank you for your encouragement to me

[Me Too]

yeaaaaaaaaah practise and practise

[amouna23]

ok thanxxxxx^_^ ♥_♥