Poem of my hair for fun

[bila00b]

When you look at my hair
you'll understand why life is unfair
looks like the barber had a bad day
even him didn't know what to say

I look like a jewish robot
I'm crying it's not my faut
Maybe he wanted to dig to my brain
now my skull feels the rain

Girls when the see they scream
My gel is a feet cream
It's a hairy funny nightmare
And that's why life is unfair

[bila00b]

tell my your opinion

[salsabil15]

it's amazing...but u should review ur poem to correct some grammatical mistakes....
Good Luck

[bila00b]

ok thank you so much

[أبوعبد الباسط]

thanks a lot
this is what you said about your hair
what about hairless people
they are poor.they have nothingto cover their bold heads.
you may ask me that i am one of them.
of course not.

[hairless17]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة أبوعبد الباسط

thanks a lot
this is what you said about your hair
what about hairless people
they are poor.they have nothingto cover their bold heads.
you may ask me that i am one of them.
of course not.

So am I

[conqueror]

hairless people are good looking .. really not bad