My dead love

[حمودة القديدي]

hello every one on this forum

it's my first time that i share what i write ..cuz i was scaring frm showin'em

but yr amzing writings made me be brave to show my writings even they're so bad
'cause i know that the essentiel of showing'em is to make'em so good
i'll not be angry of yr correction , so if u find anything wrong just corect me
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and this is one of my writings
hoping it gets ur admiration
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Let me cry ,let some expressions write
Cuz u've deprived me from my life's light
Since u left me , i'm linving in darknesss like the night
Cuz u've limitted all my chances to fight
Haha..i was thinking that i'm yr dreams knight
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You told me[that] u loved me nd u ve lied
Yeah, for our love i'd suicide
I can even deat's vehicule ride
I know it' not love it's a game so dont try to hide

So just tell me ,, why u v made our love died



waiting yr points of view about it