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[amel nina]

"When Tomorrow Comes"

The sunshine of a new day

Shines upon my face

I don't know where to begin

I don't know how it came to this

If things don't change maybe I'll

Be the one that you can't find

I've tried so many times

Tried to get it right

Just so our worlds won't

Collide like two stars in the sky

Its time we both decide

To leave this all behind

When the sun goes down

The future's looking bright

When all is said and done

And tomorrow has begun

Remember today is now yesterday

Can we find a way find a way to let it go

When tomorrow comes

Today will be a brand new day

Can we let it go

The sunshine of a new day

Shines upon my face

Reminding me of mistakes

Memories I must erase

Here's one more chance for me

To throw them all away

Today's a brand new start

We made this way too hard

We both need something like

Amnesia of the heart

We stand here face to face

See I won't look away

If you just hold my hand

We'll make it through the day

When all is said and done

And tomorrow has begun

Remember today is now yesterday

Can we find a way find a way to let it go

When tomorrow comes

Today will be a brand new day

Can we let it go




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[دينا11]

thank's a lot sister it's a good topic

[spy4me]

hi amel
it's incredibly inspiring piece of writing, really it expresses the picture above
it's exploding optimism and looking for better life and reality
thanks for brining it here
^^

[أميرة العرب]

waw girl that's really...........

sorry i can't find words to describe the way i feel

thhx 4 sharing sis


peace

[نميرة 08]

Hello my sister Amel
your topic is amizing
don't keep writing
your friend Fatima

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

heyooo sis

That's a very nice poem ... it's full of brightness and hope along with a sparkly point of view at life ... keep up the good work

see ya around

[خالد دردور]

nice work sis

[fati13]

thanks you'are the best

[fille algerie]

cooooooool ..thank you so much Amel for this wonderful words..

[السَّحابة البيضاءْ]

[Hind_dz]

When I started reading I thought it was urs n I was going 2 tell that u should've posted it on Members Writing

But it's a good 1 though

Thnx twin

^^

[amel nina]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hind_dz

When I started reading I thought it was urs n I was going 2 tell that u should've posted it on Members Writing

But it's a good 1 though

Thnx twin

^^

actually I'm not good at writing poems, but I'm trying to write some on my personal copybook, and everytime I feel like it's not good enough, I just think I'm a loser


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thanks for passing by my twin

[Hind_dz]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amel nina

actually I'm not good at writing poems, but I'm trying to write some on my personal copybook, and everytime I feel like it's not good enough, I just think I'm a loser


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thanks for passing by my twin

Noo don't say that, they r probably very good n u just don't know that cuz u can't judge urself properly

[amel nina]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hind_dz

Noo don't say that, they r probably very good n u just don't know that cuz u can't judge urself properly

it's so easy to say that, I bet that when you see one of my ridiculous poems you'll be like thatand you will say: what in the world is this thing?? believe me it's better not to post them here cuz I'll be a joke for everyone


you know?? one day I decided to write a poem about mothers but I realized that what I was writing is not for moms, I was writing about how life is sad and how sleeping is a good painkiller

I know your reaction now

[Hind_dz]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة amel nina

it's so easy to say that, I bet that when you see one of my ridiculous poems you'll be like thatand you will say: what in the world is this thing?? believe me it's better not to post them here cuz I'll be a joke for everyone


you know?? one day I decided to write a poem about mothers but I realized that what I was writing is not for moms, I was writing about how life is sad and how sleeping is a good painkiller

I know your reaction now

Yeah my reaction is: looooooooooooooooooooooooool

?u know what, send me a poem of urs in a private msg n we'll see, can u do that



now i'm really curious about ur writing lol