but now u r gone

[loulou moon]

u were the sun shine which made a brighter day
and u were the one who stood by me even when all my days turned to grey

u were my angel that i can't live without
and u were the person who made the best inside me out

u were my beautiful dream when i'm awake
and u were the one who could never be fake

but now u're gone away
and all u have left is such silent memory of the amazing old day

i think that it's time for u to hear
the words that i didn't have enough courage to say when u were here

nobody makes me feel the way u do
and even if we r miles away i will be always loving u


i hope that u like it guys
peace

[iris black]

nice words ,keep going


(but now u r gone away ,and u don't feel me here anymore)

[loulou moon]

thnx for passing by my dear

[fifibarbygirl]

good jobe daer loulou

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة loulou moon

u were the sun shine which made a brighter day
and u were the one who stood by me even when all my days turned to grey

u were my angel that i can't live without
and u were the person who made the best inside me out

u were my beautiful dream when i'm awake
and u were the one who could never be fake

but now u're gone away
and all u have left is such silent memory of the amazing old day

i think that it's time for u to hear
the words that i didn't have enough courage to say when u were here

nobody makes me feel the way u do
and even if we r miles away i will be always loving u


i hope that u like it guys
peace

Hi dear ^^

Hi sis ... well done ..... it's very beautiful and touching ... nice words and soulful expressions .... you know no matter what we write ... now matter how good or lousy words are ... i believe there's one thing makes it look beautiful .... " honesty" ... ^^ ... well ... thnx for sharing ... loved it honestly .... keep your pen busy ... never give up .. your bro ... jimmy

May Allah bless ya

[loulou moon]

thnx my dear fifi i apreciate u're encouragement

[loulou moon]

hi bro
thnx for the encoragement and i'll keep writing like you adviced but don't forget to read my writings and to give u're opinion
peace be upon u