[⌈الأشتر⌉]

Thank you. but I think there is a lot of mistakes here if you let me help you

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you need to fix especially the tenses

for example
:

What happen to our mind ==> what happens(happened) to our minds

and here

Or u feel that u are precise and really u are blind

the meaning doesn't sound right according to the previous sentence.. I think you should use the future tense : Or you will feel
and better to replace
and really.. by but you are really blind


and:
Algerien==> Algerian
Frensh==> French


What do you think my friend
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am I right
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