2019-08-23, 13:43
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Thank you. but I think there is a lot of mistakes here if you let me help you
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you need to fix especially the tenses
for example
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What happen to our mind ==> what happens(happened) to our minds
and here
اقتباس:
Or u feel that u are precise and really u are blind
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the meaning doesn't sound right according to the previous sentence.. I think you should use the future tense : Or you will feel
and better to replace
and really.. by but you are really blind
and:
Algerien==> Algerian
Frensh==> French
What do you think my friend
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am I right
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