what can I say brother? this was much better than I expected... your idea here is brilliant.. and it makes it even better feeling that you really do mean every single word you write. You should be so proud of yourself. I hope, I deeply hope, that everyone who reads your message gets it. We all are in need to a wakening call.. we hear, but do we listen? hopefully..
such a pleasure to see great talents expressed in right ways
again, I pray to Allah to keep you in the right path.. and to make everyone see what you wanna show.
May he gives you the greatest wish of all: seeing him, and May he be satisfied with you that day.
good luck, God bless you in every step