My Interfering:
No one has the right to say I don't like your poem
and who could say that he is a heartless and
disrespectful....he can do it officially and with
a respectful form in his justified critics
I must Confess:
Miss "Illina 07" I believe that you've a strong
Imagination and linking expressions with
the situation you live or feel for some phenomenon
Believe when you develope your writing it would be
harder to compete I can see that because of the way you
express but the simple way to get your Goal is
just stay right here reading the members writing why?
because they are simple and not hard to understand so
notice the way they make coherence believe step by
step you'll be highter I wish you good luck.
What I've understood?
You are talking about a hypocrite or an hypocrites
who were somehow near to you I mean you consider
tham as Friends or something like that but you discoveres
that they are a bad liers and hypocrites so you decided
to left them easily .....Also you describe their undesirable
Gestures as a bad luck to you I got it.
With all my respect:
Be war hypocrite for the truth is an ugly blade
Or
Be aware hypocrite for the truth is an ugly blade
Please explain to me what do you mean by this
I'm sorry I could not understand the meaning
and pray for you a nice fack life
Or
and pray for you a nice Fake life
An important advice!!!!!
See my topic Titled "An important advice"
Okey believe me it's benificial....
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