hi my friend ... hope u r fine
i think that it is correct but there r some mistakes it's better when u can change it ... it is not very important bcz ur introduce is clear and every one can understand it with no problemes
but 2 b more clearly
good luck 4 u dearling
i ask allah 2 help u 2 pass your test and protect u
take care
your friend * NOUSSEIBA *