salam
thanks for your reply
well concerning the correction of the this year it will take more consideration of the written expression
you can see that in the table i put about that
here I can see a great production even if there are spelling mistakes
since your form is a letter 1pt
the topic u r speaking about ur holidays 1pt
the opening sentence is great
although u adapted some ideas from the text , i think u deserve more than 3 or 4 points on it
inchaa allah all the success
good luck for tomor