[fatma258]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة ناجو2016

All the people would like to listen or read the online news . when the news become online. they will do that easier than reading newspapers ..and i
prefer that because they didn't take too much time and money . All that just beause there is internet in the world and i'm thankful for that

اعتقد تصحيحك مثالي ولكن حسب ما اظن نقولو i'm thankful وليس i thankful
وايضا هناك بعض التعديلات الاخرى التي وضعتها
ملاحطة :
في اي حالة نستعمل there is or there are ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟

There is + singulier. Ex: There is a little bird.

There are + pluriel. Ex: There are two bad boys.

so .....i like you paragraph
but i think that it's too short
4/7