منتديات الجلفة لكل الجزائريين و العرب - عرض مشاركة واحدة - vote for the best topic
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قديم 2016-01-27, 05:34   رقم المشاركة : 7
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in the topic N°3
he wrote 'We all know that there is no one take the place of this woman' its doesnt sound right , it would be better if it was 'We all know that no one can take the place of this woman'
*'you make us feel better Mom ' not fell
*We always thank Allah that you gave us A Mother like you
THE topic N°2
'It is the mother who forgive What did her son And forgiveness and pardon him ' repetition right there
i think he/she uses google traduction on this one the text isnt clear and there is so much repetition
*Mother is a school if you have prepared you preparing a good nation
IN THE TOPIC N°1
*This matter is calling for us
i think im going for numbe 1 its really the one that i've enjoyed reading










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