peace be upon you
i'm sorry I didn't write this poem in the topic of our creations because I saw that there is no right to put comments
but I need comments and critics
this is the poem I hope you'll like it
Farewell
The snow showers the icy land
And the wind allows me to send
My word on a wave's hand
To reach the ocean's end
Where it can knock the doors of my friend
Who's sitting on the golden sand
And the sea_****ls in behind
Just as a heroine of a legend
Aflying letters on the birds wings to say farewell
Which is a magic spell
From a deep tears_well
Just to say and tell
How many times I'm gonna drill
Your name not just one
Time even the distance is a shoot of a gun
That's gonna kill my life's joy and fun
i'll call you untill the night will run
and the day comes with it's sun