Hi Katy.....glad to see you again
as for the poem .....amazing
you've got great tallent indeed
and it sounds gret on guitar
i like that you wrote about your feelings
true feelings always gives colors to poems
As for the context..........my advice to you
don't link your happiness to people
cuz no matter of who gret they might look.....they are JUST POEPLE
they come and leave....the wear masks
they tell lies.....the back stab
so.......we shouldn't give them more than they deserve
Draw your path straight to your true aims
never be lost .....or distructed
don't think much.....think abt the lesson you've leant
to not repeat the mistake twice
You are one strong girl.....you're not like any girl out there
that's what i beleive
you'll get over it
You still have your whole life waiting for you to shine
So kick the gate and smile
Your sister
B_P