[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hillin

Hi spy
heheheh
they 've said that I behave such critics nd I was always denying but I think they're right Coz as I c I can't drop by any cute subject without leaving my 'long 'comments,
^^
any way,let me go back straight to the fabulous and charming poem
Great job friend
I liked it
I liked most how the pain has soon changed to challenge
nd without forgetting ur chosen tittle "blue pen' really it fits the topic
nd i think it succeeded in telling too much about the story
I think I've to end up here since I've nothing to add except
congratulation
keep in touch
Bwa

hhhhh hi hillin it's ok, criticising always improves one's performance
you know you remind me of a my colleague, she always critices everything i do and when i ask her why she replies : i like teasing you
i told you before i like reading long comments, i even think that the longer are the comment on my topic the more my topic is interesting and that really pushes me forward to give more
thank you hillin for reading
^^