[spy4me]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة Hillin

Nice one
very expressive
thu it's difficult to find the exact and suitable words to express our feelings sometimes but i think you succeeded nd u were very selective"poet"l
I liked the way you 've chosen to describe "contradiction such as when you said:l
O lady, if you set me free you are wise

But freedom in prison, is death in disguise

I liked the Story thu as I c it was sad somehow it told us about how love is sometimes unfair & tasteless
nd how the dream falls apart as soon as the lovers can't share the same feelings
congratulation,really it's wonderful
Thank u friend for sharing
Keep in touch

hi hilin, i want to say thank you for your nice words
such poems may express the poet himself or a story that inspires him
thank you again for reading
^^