Hi there sister
first i'd like to say welcome to your new home between your brothers and sisters
i hope you enjoy your time here like we all do
second
for the poem
it's amazing hard and deep and gloomy
i like this kinda poem that reflects a dark side of personality
i like the style the way you but it together
it was all perfect
my best wishes for a promising poet like you
i'll be glad to hear from you soon