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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : you can be strong "my 2nd peom"


Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-09, 20:47
hey evryone !! this's my 2nd poem , well hope u like it


nobody can understand
no one want to take my hand
i'm going to keep my way
i'm not going to change myself like what ppl say
it's better to stay apart
to save your breaking heart
but no matter how you're far
u can't runaway from fire
it's life , never been fair
it's reality , ppl actually don't care
it's fact , ppl fed of act
u have 2 learn from the past
nd live 4 the rest
Even when evrything seems wrong
stand up nd b strong
don't waste your time thinking
add some hope with beliving...


Peace

Karim_Rap_4_life
2012-06-09, 21:32
So dman gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooood and greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttt tttt avery nice poem goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddd luck

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-09, 22:08
So dman gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo ooooooooooooooooooooooooooood and greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttt tttt avery nice poem goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooodddd luck



thnnnnxxx a looooooot bro , may god bless u

ouchek-lil
2012-06-10, 13:54
very goooooood

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-10, 15:03
very goooooood



thnx broooooo ,

kristinedz
2012-06-11, 10:50
waaaaaaw amazing words
i love it
carry on

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-11, 11:16
waaaaaaw amazing words
i love it
carry on


thnnXxx sister ,, may god bless u