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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : do u remember me ?? i used 2 b ur best friend !!! T_T


Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-01, 12:27
I wrote this 4 my old friend i used 2 know her very well

well , hope u like it


i miss those dayZ
when u were next 2 me alwayZ
U were holding my hanD
telling me tht u're with me till the enD
but i made a mistaKe
i wish tht i can fix wht i breaK
I lost u
nd lost myself too
i'm sorry i hurt u
i didn't know wht 2 do
i saw u going away
i couldn't find a word 2 say
I know it's 2 late now ur gone
nd i'm alone
i didn't say goodbye
cuZz i want u 2 stay
i hope u forgive me someday
that's all what i need u 2 say





i realy miss u T_T




P.S ; if there's any mistake just tell me okey ? cuzz i'm wanna give it 2 her .

أميرة العرب
2012-06-01, 13:25
I like it

keep going

ask her to forgive u directly and that u regret what u did or said 2 her

Narcisse95
2012-06-01, 13:27
OMG!!!
this is totally awsome ••• u'r cool girl
carry on
i'm sure tht ur friend LOVES U
;))))))
=)))))

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-01, 13:43
I like it

keep going

ask her to forgive u directly and that u regret what u did or said 2 her



thnxx a lot sister ,,, i'll do it

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-01, 13:45
OMG!!!
this is totally awsome ••• u'r cool girl
carry on
i'm sure tht ur friend LOVES U
;))))))
=)))))




hhhhhhhhhhhh
thnxX my lil angel :o
i hope so ; )

Narcisse95
2012-06-01, 15:16
hhhhhhhhhhhh
thnxX my lil angel :o
i hope so ; )

I am not little
:(

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-01, 17:20
I am not little
:(



hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
sorry ....
okey , than thnx my bigggg angel

المتحجبة
2012-06-01, 18:21
waw.........it 's nice....good try ...........don't give up.

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-02, 12:44
waw.........it 's nice....good try ...........don't give up.


thnxx sister ;)

rola.29
2012-06-04, 19:00
:mh92:
these are wonderful words ... so soft .. so full of kindness ..you know what?? i'll send them to my best friend
i wish she enjoys it .. thanks

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-04, 21:05
:mh92:
these are wonderful words ... so soft .. so full of kindness ..you know what?? i'll send them to my best friend
i wish she enjoys it .. thanks


thhhhhhnxxx my sister and i'm so glad that u like it <3 <3

la princesse imen
2012-06-05, 18:27
Nice I think she'll like it
good work

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-05, 22:33
Nice I think she'll like it
good work



Thnxxx a lot my friend , hope so ;)

Sadinne
2012-06-08, 15:20
Hey there =D

I really liked it, it was really nice and we could clearly feel what you felt at these moments =p

I had the same probelm a couple of years ago with my best friends, but al hamdoulilah, everything is fine between us now and our fight is just part of the past...I hope the same thing will happen with you and your friend, and things will go back to normal <3

Good Luck

miss.cool
2012-06-08, 17:06
amazing peom

n dont worry sometimes we all make mistakes silly ones
but the one who read it wont care at all believe me


keep it up

peace

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-08, 17:23
Hey there =D

I really liked it, it was really nice and we could clearly feel what you felt at these moments =p

I had the same probelm a couple of years ago with my best friends, but al hamdoulilah, everything is fine between us now and our fight is just part of the past...I hope the same thing will happen with you and your friend, and things will go back to normal <3

Good Luck





hey : )!!!
thnnks a lot my sister you've already excited me ,,,!!
i realy hope that evrything go back like it was b4
thnx again, God bless you.

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-08, 17:27
amazing peom

n dont worry sometimes we all make mistakes silly ones
but the one who read it wont care at all believe me


keep it up

peace


thnxx my friend
, i cherish ur words may god bless u .

ouchek-lil
2012-06-10, 13:52
good very good

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-10, 15:04
good very good


thnx alot my bro.

الصديقة المخلصة
2012-06-11, 00:12
Great i wish i have a friend as you sweety
if she did not forgive you trust me she have no feelings and a big stone not a heart realy because the choosen word are very teatching
Keep going

Karim_Rap_4_life
2012-06-11, 10:09
Well I should start with your last remark .......even if your poem is full of mistakes there is no shame no don't be hesitated coz this are a real words from your heart and if she were your best friend she would never take your faults seriously she would look into the meaning and the message from your poem.
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your poem is free mistaken there is no mistakes and I liked the story it's the same as mine and believe me you'll be alright with that friend
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"If you love something tight let it go if it backs it'll be yours forever"
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BE STRONG

kristinedz
2012-06-11, 10:49
ohhhhhhh , i looove it
Keep going sister
i'm shur ur friend'll forgive u

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-11, 10:55
Great i wish i have a friend as you sweety
if she did not forgive you trust me she have no feelings and a big stone not a heart realy because the choosen word are very teatching
Keep going


thnksss a looooot honey :o
,, and she already forgave me
god bless u sister

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-11, 11:08
Well I should start with your last remark .......even if your poem is full of mistakes there is no shame no don't be hesitated coz this are a real words from your heart and if she were your best friend she would never take your faults seriously she would look into the meaning and the message from your poem.
.
.
.
your poem is free mistaken there is no mistakes and I liked the story it's the same as mine and believe me you'll be alright with that friend
.
.
.
"If you love something tight let it go if it backs it'll be yours forever"
.
.
.
BE STRONG




thnxx a lot bro 4 ur notice but i wrote that remark cuz this's my first peom and i wasn't sure if wrote it correct
anyway i give it to her and she love it and forgave me
thnxx again i'll be strong next time

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-11, 11:10
ohhhhhhh , i looove it
Keep going sister
i'm shur ur friend'll forgive u




thnxxx my sister ,,, may god bless u <3

قمر البتول
2012-06-17, 15:20
that great poeam thanks
and keep going

Thαt ģίяĻ
2012-06-17, 21:49
that great poeam thanks
and keep going






thnks my sister i I appreciate ur passing

أميرة العرب
2012-08-04, 19:01
thnxx a lot sister ,,, i'll do it

never mind my dear...any time

luv yaaaa