My second*stupid* poem

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

Hello everyone ,

I decided to make a second poem , because i liked the first one =)


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School is a place of learning
but it sucks because you get up in the early morning
I enter the stupid hall
and sit on my chair near the wall
I have no idea what the teacher is talking about
and i feel like i want to shout
He is still talking
it isn't shocking
Because i got used to it
but i really want to quit
The clock is still ticking
but something is missing
There is no cheer in here
however the end of it is near
In few weeks we will have a test
we will try to do our best
But still,we are stressed
and we seriously need a rest

:D

[miss.cool]

hhhhhhh so funny

yeah its soon gonna end



why u call it stupid??
its not at all

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

hhhhhhh so funny

yeah its soon gonna end



why u call it stupid??
its not at all


hhhhh
:1:It's stupid because it took too much time

[miss.cool]

hhhhhhh

but its awesome

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

hhhhhhh

but its awesome
thanks
glad you think so:D

[Black_Poison]

hhhhhhhhhhhh
really cute and funny
you are tallented girl
any girl in your age won't be able to write something like that
keep it up sweetheart

[maymay]

oh common.you're still tooooo young to hate school...wait to see what's coming hhhh....I mean really,you should enjoy those days,they are one of the best memories you'll have when you grow older sis,ok?so best wishes for your BEM and enjoy your life....

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

hhhhhhhhhhhh
really cute and funny
you are tallented girl
any girl in your age won't be able to write something like that
keep it up sweetheart
Thanks
i think that writing a poem doesn't take much,just a little imagination,,then let your pen go,or in this case,your keyboard?:1:

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

oh common.you're still tooooo young to hate school...wait to see what's coming hhhh....I mean really,you should enjoy those days,they are one of the best memories you'll have when you grow older sis,ok?so best wishes for your BEM and enjoy your life....
Yes,i heard of what's coming,but for now,i'll just stick to the Bem ;)
thank you ☺

[rola.29]

hi ikram,
i agree with black...(fadwa isn't it).. you should keep writing
no matter how long it takes.. the main thing is taht you'll feel happy and satifdied when you finish writing it
Good luck... don't call your poems stpid again ok?? see you nearly

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

hi ikram,
i agree with black...(fadwa isn't it).. you should keep writing
no matter how long it takes.. the main thing is taht you'll feel happy and satifdied when you finish writing it
Good luck... don't call your poems stpid again ok?? see you nearly
Thank you :rolleyes:

[spy4me]

hi ikram
well, im glad to say this is a very lovely poem, why? because such poem with simple diction and simple theme is the first step for excellent poems
i remember at your age i couldnt make even a good paragraph
so keep writing and read also to improve your vocabulary and style then inshallah you will be a good and prolific writer and poet
remember never try to compare yourself with the others, you'll have your own style
it's better that we call it an ambitious poem rather because you look a promising poet
may Allah help you
peace

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

hi ikram
well, im glad to say this is a very lovely poem, why? because such poem with simple diction and simple theme is the first step for excellent poems
i remember at your age i couldnt make even a good paragraph
so keep writing and read also to improve your vocabulary and style then inshallah you will be a good and prolific writer and poet
remember never try to compare yourself with the others, you'll have your own style
it's better that we call it an ambitious poem rather because you look a promising poet
may Allah help you
peace



thank you for the awesome comment
nah,i wanna keep it as a hobby,i started poetry two days ago xD
i'll try to work w<ith your advice though,inshallah i will improve ;)

[نهـــى]

wonderful words and so funny

and it's not stupid at allll

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

wonderful words and so funny

and it's not stupid at allll
Thank you =))

[david beckham 23]

thank you

do your best to be the best

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

thank you

do your best to be the best

No problem and thanks*

[فرح احلام]

your poem informed me that there's a terrible talents in our country like yours i'm so proud ofyou . you must be so happy of what you've realized thank's again

[○•ميسون•○]

hello Ikram

hmmm It is good poem my dear





and this is so funny [thx]


you are the best

[وشَـ،ـآحْ الـصـِـبـآا]

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
that's cool never call what you write stupid
coz you can write

[♥إكْــــــرَامْ♥]

your poem informed me that there's a terrible talents in our country like yours i'm so proud ofyou . you must be so happy of what you've realized thank's again



and this is so funny [thx]

you are the best

that's cool never call what you write stupid

coz you can write


Hello =)
Thanks alot for dropping by , you guys are so kind ^^ and what you said cheered me up a lot :D maybe in the future i'd write another poem :P

[○•ميسون•○]

oh my god

in the future!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is not good for you

cuz you can write

[chebili16GB]

( because i liked the first one =) )


Great!