how about telling me a story?

[azouiomar]

كما ارى العديد من الاعضاء هنا في المنتدى يجيدون الانجليزية.............وانا كنت اظن اني الواحد البارع فيها..تبا لتواضعي الشديد.....

اذا ما رايكم بطرح امثال من كتابتكم على الحياة حكم او شيئ من هذا القبيل انا اكتب الكثير منها ...........اليكم واحدة وكل عضو يخرج شعر من عندو باش شوفو حنا من هو الاروع في هذه اللغة اعلم انه انا..لكن لا باس تواضعي يحثني على اعطائكم فرصة..............مرة اخرى اقولها والحمد لله كم انا متواضع

ها هو الشعر ذا

i won't think about the past because i'm beasy to think about the future

i won't think about people who made me nuts in the past because i'm beasy to replace them by people who earn my care

step by step ....day and day out hitman is climbing to the top

[Black_Poison]

hey bro
wasssssssssup
i think you'd better put this topic in the english section
you'll find a lot of wonderful tallented people to meet
and discuss in English
i wrote two poems there
you can go and check them out

i really like wht you wrote
keep going

[Black_Poison]

note
we say busy not beasy

[azouiomar]

yeah busy not beasy.................i-m sorry .........

after all i think i'm not great on this ********

i'm just a girk .....

oh.............life is bad

[azouiomar]

no hell no...............i'm great and no body on earth can tell me than i'm not ........yeah i made mistakes but i'm still damn good on this

اسف لقد انزعجت للحظة

[مجنونة لأسباب أمنية]

هههههههههههه

[Black_Poison]

come on
don't be so sad
i'm sure you will do great
we allways learn from our mistakes
you are still young
you have a life full of success waiting for you
so keep up the good spirit


some day i 'll be seeing you on the top
the best of the best
don't forget who you are

you are hitman

hhhhhhhhhhhh
i'm sure that kids in your class don't even know
present simple tense
right?

[سماح 2]

NICE IDEA BUT I HAVE NOTHINK TO SAY
ineed alot of time to think about it

[azouiomar]

come on
don't be so sad
i'm sure you will do great
we allways learn from our mistakes
you are still young
you have a life full of success waiting for you
so keep up the good spirit


some day i 'll be seeing you on the top
the best of the best
don't forget who you are

you are hitman

hhhhhhhhhhhh
i'm sure that kids in your class don't even know
present simple tense
right?
oh god .............oh god..........sis you made me laugh

yeah you made me feel so good.....more than any time before...

you know what you were right ..........my friends............they don't know any thing about english...

they think i'm from another planete because i know english so well

but you re right day and day out..............hitman will step on the top as the best in the world on every thing.......

of course when i say hitman i mean me............you know...........i'm just a fan after all

[azouiomar]

هههههههههههه

thank you.................

[azouiomar]

هههههههههههه

NICE IDEA BUT I HAVE NOTHINK TO SAY
ineed alot of time to think about it

so you have no thing 4 me....................oh yeah

[Black_Poison]

oh god .............oh god..........sis you made me laugh

yeah you made me feel so good.....more than any time before...

you know what you were right ..........my friends............they don't know any thing about english...

they think i'm from another planete because i know english so well

but you re right day and day out..............hitman will step on the top as the best in the world on every thing.......

of course when i say hitman i mean me............you know...........i'm just a fan after all

hhhhhh
i'm glad to see you laughing
i hope you are not laughing at me hhhhh
but don't forget when you get on the top some day
remember you sister
hhhhhhhh

[azouiomar]

oh yeah i'll remember you....................as the greatest girl on speaking english i have ever seen in my life....

and when i step to the top.......i wiil never forget that is you re better than me and you earn to step on the top more than i do

wo wo wo you know it

[Black_Poison]

i'm sure you will be greater than me just have faith in what you do
you remind me of my self hhhh

they were thinking that i was from U.S.A
wish you all the best

[مانو]

every cloud has a silver lining

[die schone frau]

ich kann nur mit deutsch sprichen

[azouiomar]

i'm sure you will be greater than me just have faith in what you do
you remind me of my self hhhh

they were thinking that i was from U.S.A
wish you all the best


really..........that is great


yes i 'll beleive in my talents


thanks sis god bless you.......................................

[azouiomar]

every cloud has a silver lining



yeah ..............that is good one mano

[azouiomar]

ich kann nur mit deutsch sprichen


i told you by english not by spanish

[B.Mourad1997]

اخي تعرف بلي انا و الانجليزية جامي نتلاقو ههههه
منفهم وااااالوا الكلام لي راك كاتبه فهمت كلمة ولا زوج فقط ههههه

[- إكرام -]

ohh you're so good at speaking englich

i like this ******** a lot but i still learn it
i just know how i say it .not write it

good luck
bay bay

[أميرة مملكة السعادة]

Peace upon you

First I want to thank you for this topic

I love English
I will write you a poem
Hope you like it

the title : this life is nothing

you can smile
you can change your stile
you can buy enything
but can you buy every thing ?
you can see that nothing is good and simple word
but do you know what it mean ? do you know the real meaning ?
yes of course you don't
all the people says that the life is nothing
but for me is not maybe it's the same for you
in this life there is the good and there is the bad
there is the happy and there is the sad
Have you asked yourself one day for yourself?
in wish type you are ? What is your job, who offer to this world?
try to ask your self and you know i need your answer
if any person in this world asked him self about him self The world is more beautiful than this situation
may be the sad will be happy and the bad will be not
yes. the world can be changed , but if you want to change it
Thanks to read my objective

good bye
take care of your self
good luck




Djoumana

[Black_Poison]

here is a poem titled

leave me alone

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Leave me alone
I don't need any one
I want to be by my own
I need to know myself this once
*************
I hate what people say
their words cut more than a knife
I want to stay away
To keep them all out of my life
************
I don't want more freinds
They all turn their backs to me
Just like the autumn's leaves
Falling one by one that's what i see
Only someone to call a freind
That's the only thing i needed
They really made my heart to bleed
****************
I don’t want a familly
They are hurting me much more
We are supposed to be together
Leading thus sailing ship to the shore
Suddenly the ship drowened
I the middle of the sea
And every one is lost inside
Seeking their ways
And all my dreamswent with the tide
Taken by the waves
********************
I don’t want to love
It’s just going to break my heart
I kow the story is gonna end
Before it even gets to start
IDON’T NEED MORE PAIN
I don’t need to take more blame
I don’t want to be ashamed
******************
They were my dream
We were together to make our happiness
But sometimes our bonds
Bring us more sadness
They took the dream form me
And left me in the darkness
Now i have only nighmares
That drive to madness
*********************
When i gave a smile
They gave me a tear
When i gave a laugh
They gave me more fear
When i needed a hand
I found that no one’s here
********************
So leave me alone
KEEP OUT OF MY WAY
Every thing for me is done
Life is not my game to play

[أميرة مملكة السعادة]

thank's i'd like it
it was goooood
thank youuuu
bye good luck

[مانو]

i know that hitman hhhhhhhhhhhhhhh you can speak english

[الاميرة وسيلة]

why study come
why i will go out
i will study hard
due to i will win my exam
to come back to djelfa fast


hhh it is just a poem because i will miss djelfa when i will study to win my brevet exam inshallah
there are some mistakes but no problem hhh

[azouiomar]

thank you my friends you re great...............keep going..............

[azouiomar]

keep going brothers come on...............i'm waiting 4 you

[~كِبْريَاء أمِيرَة~]

ههههههههه
شكرا جزيلا لك

[knives55]

yes it is no yes good and if you know good tomorrow pizza
بركولي كتبة جمله صحيح بلفرونسي

[ninour]

thanks bro this is a cool idea
take that
enough is never enough