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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : A Beggar


spy4me
2012-03-30, 19:51
a beggar not like any other, triggers a special feeling in me
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So sad and blue, to see that poor asking for food, and too, tears flow
Every time needs people to know and more to go
Through what makes him undergo, his woe, gives show
That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain
I feel I'm all the time running away
When he walks next to my way, I want to say
Look at me, I'm bleak, those pieces make me sick and weak for a week just to pick
What way should I take, it's fake, to make all this shake,
And keeping pay, the price, for trice, I knew
That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain
So deep so far, that being like a stranger at home, his scar, tells more
About his suffering from poor, my star, in the sky, trying to sway me long with my soul, I feel sole, now I know
That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain
I pray, everyday, all people never say, “look at that foolish”, because I keep in mind, they still blind, to see, to find, what I could see, what I could know
That I’m wrong when I plain, I’m wrong when I complain
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and you will you ever complain
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Mohamed
2012-03-30, 20:15
Very nice brother!
I really like the rhythm, the internal rhyme.
Yesterday I said I was proud of you; now I'm sure I will always be
It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.
Keep it up

Karim_Rap_4_life
2012-03-30, 20:27
very nice sir very best of the best carry on

Karim_Rap_4_life
2012-03-30, 20:28
It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.

Could you explain more sir It's not clear

Mohamed
2012-03-30, 20:39
I think we have a problem in Algeria. People say they read books, but when it comes to production (writing) everybody finds it so hard. That's why I'm saying it's good to see people who are able to produce an compose their own works :)

spy4me
2012-03-30, 20:40
Very nice brother!
I really like the rhythm, the internal rhyme.
Yesterday I said I was proud of you; now I'm sure I will always be
It's so nice to see people produce pieces of literature not just consume.
Keep it up
thanks mohamed, a compliment i feel proud of
you're the best

spy4me
2012-03-30, 20:43
very nice sir very best of the best carry on
thank you karim for reading
you're a good writer as well as a good poet

Karim_Rap_4_life
2012-04-06, 16:51
thank you Sir ...I don't think i'm a good writer as much as you and sir Mohamed you're teh best wish you good luck

Karim_Rap_4_life
2012-04-06, 16:54
I think we have a problem in Algeria. People say they read books, but when it comes to production (writing) everybody finds it so hard. That's why I'm saying it's good to see people who are able to produce an compose their own works :)

yeah we already know that there is a problem when it come to production exactly when we talk about Foreign ******** . If I told you something would you believe me?? I don't read poems? I just prefer one kind of literary works which is the detective novels and that's all.