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[amouna23]

Peace and love will set us free

If you want to live in peace,
You must be friendly with other,
And helpful to people .

If you want to be loved,
You must think not only about your self,
But about the other too

If you want to be free,
You must decide about yourself alone
Without depending on any body
Don’t hate your foes but love them,
Because LOVE and PEACE
Will set people FREE

[حكاية قلب]

Yes Nicee Words Girl
But it seems like a thought Not a poem...

Wait the new from You
Good Luck


peace
^^

[Me Too]

trueeeeeeeeeeeeee

[amouna23]

thanx for your Reply

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

yes it seems good but as our sister told you it seems like a thought not a poem cuz you know that ppoems need rhymes in the end of eatch line and if you need some extra explanation follow this link please

http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=816851

[amouna23]

Thank you very much for this valuable advice

[Natali3]

i liked it my friend

go ....on

[amouna23]

thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx ^_^

[safioo]

LOVE and PEACE
Will set people FREE

thank you brow