مجموعة خاصة للكتابة بالانجليزية )منة الرحمن و Karim-Rap--4-lifeوالأصدقاء

[ابتساام]

في هذا الموضوع أريد لم شمل كل من له حس بالأدب كل من يستطيع أن يغوص في أعماقه ويخرج الفن الراقي من قلبه
كل من يستطيع أن يكتب شعرا أو خاطرة باللغة الإنجليزية والعربية
لهذا اريد أن نشكل مجموعة نختار لها اسما جميلا ونعبر عن مايجول في خواطرنا


مارأيكم

[ابتساام]

There are a lot of dark clouds in the sky
Many bad memories in my mind
Like the lightning struck the tree
Like the shock make you not free
I was afraid of the reactions
I was searched to find the solutions
I fell into the trap
Really I needed a slap
Just to wake up
And say that I wanna break up
From this delusion
I know we only die once
But for me I die twice or more
I know the ocean is bigger than the sea
And the caterpillar ****morphoses into a butterfly
Such as her mind is smaller than mine
And to ghost she ****morphose
The tears are running down my cheeks
Listen to me hear me
Do you think that the sparrow not fall out the nest
And the salmon leaves and never returns to the river
You decide because that was you now me
I'm such as the flower and the tree
When the wind blow very strongly
I'm strong
Such as the mountain remains lofty
Like the sea when he gets angry
Such as the seagulls me, fly away
But you stay
Down
You was the lightning and I am the thunder
Comes after you or calm before storm
Some people said
Turn around, look inside, look outside
You're facing the wrong way
What can I do§ the hate, Vindictiveness
Circilates with my blood
Throughout all my body
Words allow us to cominicate
Not any more

[sakira]

Jamais ne me laisse,
il n'y a que toi qui peut lire
les pages que j'ai si peur d'ouvrir
Les cris de détresse
Peuvent cacher mes soupirs
Disparaissent devant ton sourire


Oh mama, parfois le vent m'emmène,
M'égare et aussitôt me ramène
Oh mama, de toutes les âmes que j'aime
Mon coeur bat toujours plus pour la même, yeah ...


Sur ma vie je t'en fais la promesse, promesse
Je n'ferai jamais rien qui te blesse, te blesse

[sakira]

Promise not to leave, said I never disappear
She knows I'll come back someday,
Crying in the bathroom as the mirror disappear
Holding on to favorite moments


Oh mama I think I did it again
I got lost in the wind again,
Oh mama I think I did it again
I got lost in the wind again

[ابتساام]

nice poem sakira

[حكاية قلب]

Yes We Will Try To , why not ?

What u think Karim ?

and the others

[ابتساام]

it's okay
just attempt
thx

[مِيـــمْ]

Nice .........

[amouna23]

that's good idea
let's start now

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hi every body here wassup....I just want to say that I'm happy for you all and I like the idea that byou propose but there is a problem and here is:
(I've no time) but just wait for me i'll be always here to comment and to share my poems and thoughts and topics with you ................thank you so much peace up!

[ابتساام]

you're welcome

[ابتساام]

مارأيك لازم نظموها

[.kiki]

Hi there, liked the idea very much, thanks a million sissy

here's a new poem i've written


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It’s almost midnight

And I’m still with my pillow in a great fight

Different thoughts and scenes I see so bright

Different stories, different ends, different people, different feelings

But ONE single bleeding heart

Always so lonely, so hurt

Sometimes I think I’ve had enough

And days turn to years, a feeling so tough

Sometimes I feel like a queen

When your memories make me happy like I’ve never been

And I look up to the sky

And feel so satisfied

And regret every tear and every “why”

Sometimes I see it so simple

And sometimes I can’t understand this tie

Sometimes I petty my heart feeling it trembles

But sometimes I enjoy the freezing muscle, so dead, so quite

And then I always wonder…

Could a dead frozen heart beat again?

And for a second, it seemed like it might!



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[Sadinne]

Promise not to leave, said I never disappear
She knows I'll come back someday,
Crying in the bathroom as the mirror disappear
Holding on to favorite moments


Oh mama I think I did it again
I got lost in the wind again,
Oh mama I think I did it again
I got lost in the wind again

These are the lyrics to Justin Nozuka's song Heartless =p

[Sadinne]

Hey there ^^

So, I really like this idea, and I was wondering if I could join in? =p

[♫ وهج الأمـل ♫]

Hi guys

منة الرحمن It's me

Sorry to be so late

,, But after my baccalaureate exam I had to take a rest

I've got 14.85 .. I was sad in the begining but thanks for God

I've worked better but ...you know

The only thing I was happy for it was to get 19 in English

And If Allah wants , I'm going to learn English in the university

It's my first choise

I'll be with you for these last days before Ramadan

Then I'll be back after Eid Alfitr Bi Idn Allah

}} See you later guys

[Sadinne]

Hi guys

منة الرحمن It's me

Sorry to be so late

,, But after my baccalaureate exam I had to take a rest

I've got 14.85 .. I was sad in the begining but thanks for God

I've worked better but ...you know

The only thing I was happy for it was to get 19 in English

And If Allah wants , I'm going to learn English in the university

It's my first choise

I'll be with you for these last days before Ramadan

Then I'll be back after Eid Alfitr Bi Idn Allah

}} See you later guys








Hey there
^^

Congratulations on your good results, you did great, & I hope you'll have a good time in your university =D

19 In english, wow that's amazing *o* I hope I'll do as good as you did inchallah =p

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

hey Ibtisam welcome back what happened with you you' were (3odw ma7dour) why?

[ابتساام]

والله ياكريم مافهمت والو علاه عضو محظور درت موضوع في قسم الشكاوي لم افهم سبب حظري ومبعد رجعوني

[ابتساام]

لازم نكملو فكرتنا ولا مازال غلبكم رمضان هههههه
صح فطوووووركم وسحوووووركم

نبداو مع بعض نديرو قصائد وخواطر نختارو مواضيع معينة ونقسمو المواضيع يعني كل عضوين ياخذو موضوع

[ابتساام]

the self esteem
The self esteem is crown on the head, you should know
Never put in your mind that you can bow
To human except the Creator who make you grow
You should gather your strength and show
Show it to the people, then they'll follow, yes you
Before the train time go
Before the wind blow
And in the delusions you'll drown
A good picture express you draw
The life is not a lie
It is one life then comes a day when you die
You will say to the world goodbye
Is not the good time to cry
Seize your opportunity to see the sky
The flocks of birds when they fly
And enjoy with the sunset and the sunrise

There is who'll forget your name
Because what's meaning of fame
Without a noble and heroic aim
We see the difference and the same
There are solutions and jams
Don't defraud people and blame
But process by the same way

I wanna go out from this ash
Or I will, I will crush
I'll try to find my way
But how can I
And with which way

[ابتساام]

هادي الخاطرة عندها عام كامل وهي مكتوبة وموضوعة في ملف افكار مشتتة يعني هي خواطر في خاطرة

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hey sorry to be late I Was busy writing some topics on “English Learning” section. I present this humble words to Djelfa members and sorry for those whom I did not mention their names, I decided to post it here first coz this section made me write this small poem in approximately one hour.
During reading you’ll find that this one is about a conversation between two Karims bad one good one, one written in black and the other in blue. I don’t know how the idea invaded my mind hhhh. Read it carefully and focus on the last lines hhhh, Enjoy J
Gift to people I like

Being against walk the walk talk the talk
I talk what I want to talk don’t care for the folk
Fight I except wherever I walk
I got no respect for others views
And my arm is here again and I’ve to use
I oppose coz I’ve nothing to lose can you suppose
Yeah, go ahead man;
I think cowards have hearts like a plastic
Got many friends lovers as fantastic
They’re popular even they’re sent to Jupiter
Me dima karah lonely just like black colour
Schools, universities and they got their seats
They got love in between they take places
They’re seen cute but they’re so rude
I see ya man
You’re Sinking in your solitude
People Always call you the dude
Oh man keep yourself out of this
You don’t deserve this do they really fit
And you Gotta trust the fates
Many gates oh baby many gates
Hey homie you’ve to listen to me
Every body is running from me
Why I always on my backyard
Making my Rap’s rhyme wild
Like Mike Tyson I was supposed to be
But never mind I believe in destiny
I’m sure your heart is pure
They’re the fool they need the cure
Be ready to hopefulness procedure
You’re hated by the double face
Wherever you go you leave a trace
You need to continue the race
Yeah, that’s the problem “you know”
No it’s not right for no more
Take a look to the old days before
And now!
A brand new persons real friends
Read what they wrote with their hands
Devil is widespread and this is a fact
Aspects like that you need to expect
You’re not lonely you got that, stand that
Djelfa’s members wish you the best
They’re loyal even they’re virtual
You need them just like car need fuel
Yay Yay
But I saw that in a different way
I was easy to take a fray
When I remember that I just laugh
I realised they’ve nothing except love
Oh my God I looked like I was negative
I tried to be positive even though sadness I live
Look how You’re sensitive
Now open your love’s package
Everybody deserves your message
hey look!
I arranged this for so long
But hopelessness tied my tongue
I must confess I was hopeless
Words I’ve said full of ridiculousness
Sorry it was not my intention
As Nana said
“When I mention your name
The pain I feel ashamed”
Attention
Sorry for every one I misunderstood
I like you but darkness was my mood

Oh man this tastes so Good
This is for every one don’t run
Black Poison just come back don’t run
Miss Cool come back here soon
Fly Boy hey thank you
غزلانhey thank you too
Xchow come back let’s go to the studio
حكاية قلب where’re you where do you go
إبتسام you made me write this you know
Hillin hey let’s keep playing
Amel Nina is waiting

Rola l’écriture mais bien sur le texte est dure
Quand je pense au passé le présent et le futur
l’état est fur et à mésure
Donc je fais des paroles contre la dictature
Je vos propose de reste des amis
Français ou Anglais c’est la même famille

Kiki I’m happy for you frankly
May May need you to forget the fight
Muslims hearts is white right
You all are Djelfa’s forum light
Eastside, Westside, North-side, Southside
We’re united in Algeria’s Inside
Administrators I need an upgrade J
Of course If you don’t mind J

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hey sorry to be late I Was busy writing some topics on “English Learning” section. I present this humble words to Djelfa members and sorry for those whom I did not mention their names, I decided to post it here.
I wrote this small poem in approximately one hour.
During reading you’ll find that this one is about a conversation between two Karims bad one good one, one written in black and the other in blue. I don’t know how the idea invaded my mind hhhh. Read it carefully and focus on the last lines hhhh, Enjoy J
Gift to people I like

Being against walk the walk talk the talk
I talk what I want to talk don’t care for the folk
Fight I except wherever I walk
I got no respect for others views
And my arm is here again and I’ve to use
I oppose coz I’ve nothing to lose can you suppose
Yeah, go ahead man;
I think cowards have hearts like a plastic
Got many friends lovers as fantastic
They’re popular even they’re sent to Jupiter
Me dima karah lonely just like black colour
Schools, universities and they got their seats
They got love in between they take places
They’re seen cute but they’re so rude
I see ya man
You’re Sinking in your solitude
People Always call you the dude
Oh man keep yourself out of this
You don’t deserve this do they really fit
And you Gotta trust the fates
Many gates oh baby many gates
Hey homie you’ve to listen to me
Every body is running from me
Why I always on my backyard
Making my Rap’s rhyme wild
Like Mike Tyson I was supposed to be
But never mind I believe in destiny
I’m sure your heart is pure
They’re the fool they need the cure
Be ready to hopefulness procedure
You’re hated by the double face
Wherever you go you leave a trace
You need to continue the race
Yeah, that’s the problem “you know”
No it’s not right for no more
Take a look to the old days before
And now!
A brand new persons real friends
Read what they wrote with their hands
Devil is widespread and this is a fact
Aspects like that you need to expect
You’re not lonely you got that, stand that
Djelfa’s members wish you the best
They’re loyal even they’re virtual
You need them just like car need fuel
Yay Yay
But I saw that in a different way
I was easy to take a fray
When I remember that I just laugh
I realised they’ve nothing except love
Oh my God I looked like I was negative
I tried to be positive even though sadness I live
Look how You’re sensitive
Now open your love’s package
Everybody deserves your message
hey look!
I arranged this for so long
But hopelessness tied my tongue
I must confess I was hopeless
Words I’ve said full of ridiculousness
Sorry it was not my intention
As Nana said
“When I mention your name
The pain I feel ashamed”
Attention
Sorry for every one I misunderstood
I like you but darkness was my mood

Oh man this tastes so Good
This is for every one don’t run
Black Poison just come back don’t run
Miss Cool come back here soon
Fly Boy hey thank you
غزلانhey thank you too
Xchow come back let’s go to the studio
حكاية قلب where’re you where do you go
إبتسام you made me write this you know
Hillin hey let’s keep playing
Amel Nina is waiting

Rola l’écriture mais bien sur le texte est dure
Quand je pense au passé le présent et le futur
l’état est fur et à mésure
Donc je fais des paroles contre la dictature
Je vos propose de reste des amis
Français ou Anglais c’est la même famille

Kiki I’m happy for you frankly
May May need you to forget the fight
Muslims hearts is white right
You all are Djelfa’s forum light
Eastside, Westside, North-side, Southside
We’re united in Algeria’s Inside
Administrators I need an upgrade J
Of course If you don’t mind J

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Sorry a mistake hhhhh

[ابتساام]

wow you're great

[ابتساام]

بعودة كريم بقصيدة جديدة تعود المجموعة للحياة

[ابتساام]

karim i need your opinion
the self esteem
The self esteem is crown on the head, you should know
Never put in your mind that you can bow
To human except the Creator who make you grow
You should gather your strength and show
Show it to the people, then they'll follow, yes you
Before the train time go
Before the wind blow
And in the delusions you'll drown
A good picture express you draw
The life is not a lie
It is one life then comes a day when you die
You will say to the world goodbye
Is not the good time to cry
Seize your opportunity to see the sky
The flocks of birds when they fly
And enjoy with the sunset and the sunrise

There is who'll forget your name
Because what's meaning of fame
Without a noble and heroic aim
We see the difference and the same
There are solutions and jams
Don't defraud people and blame
But process by the same way

I wanna go out from this ash
Or I will, I will crush
I'll try to find my way
But how can I
And with which way

[Hind_dz]

I really like the idea n I hope I can B a part

My Regards

[♫ وهج الأمـل ♫]

Hey guys your writings are so good

I was a little busy last period

but I'll be back to writing so soon

so wait for me

[ابتساام]

I'm waiting you baby

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Wow wow wow this one is incredibly unbelievable
The Idea is well represented and well discussed
I agree with you in every word you said coz it’s real
“Self-esteem” is a way to success you know besides
“Self-confidence”

Technically
I see what you wrote like a poem more than a “thought”
Coz It contains regular Rhymes in the end of each line.

Everything is coherent but the last part I think it’s not related
To the subject somehow. It’s good and regular but I think
It should be in another poem.

I’m proud of you it’s only the beginning, maybe I’m good
At writing but I am not sure that I can evaluate better than May May
And Hillin try to ask them.
Keep it up.

[ابتساام]

thaaaaaaaaaaank you karim

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

We are waiting for your next oen I think that it will one fo the best

[ابتساام]

inshallah karim thank you bro

[♫ وهج الأمـل ♫]

? Hi guys , how are you doing

I'm going back to you after ramadan if allah wants that to be

Ibtisseme concerinig our study

Sister "miss cool" opened a topic for us

1st year english students

have a look here (http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?p=11159367#post11159367)

See you soon guys

have fun and don't forget

we're in the last of ramadan