I'm sad

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

الــــــسلام عـــلــــــيـــكــم


This is my third poem . It's a short one but has a big meaning


I'm sad


I'm trying to be strong
But I know I'm wrong


There is a feelings of detest
That really brokes my heart



Ahhh ... I'm weak
Help me cuz I'm sick


I suffer all the time
But I hide this with a smile


? Could anyone take my hand
? And change my life by a word



:) As I said before , It's very short .... I hope you liked it :)

[Natali3]

Hi ... my friend

In my opinion it is Nice and Expressive words ...I think it is not matter short or long ...the important is the meaning and context ......Ok

For me I liked this words sooo much
I suffer all the time
But I hide this with a smile

Go ahead my friend

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

Hi ... my friend

In my opinion it is Nice and Expressive words ...I think it is not matter short or long ...the important is the meaning and context ......Ok

For me I liked this words sooo much
I suffer all the time
But I hide this with a smile

Go ahead my friend



Thank you sis ,

Yes , you're right :)

I'm happy cuz you liked it;)

[saya2011]

it's very nice poem
it's a small poem but has a big meaning
continue like that brother
:D:D:D but be happy in the next time

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

it's very nice poem
it's a small poem but has a big meaning
continue like that brother
:D:D:D but be happy in the next time

I' will in shaa Allah

ThanK,yOu

[مبْدِعَـﮧْ حَتَّى فِي ـأَخْطَآْئِي]

Don't be sad Brow !!

I will wake you up to a new day

A day full of joy N success

Don't give up ,

There is no life with despair and no desperation with life



Wonderful writing ^^


Keep it like that all the time

GuD luck

[أمل روسيكادا]

nice poem...expressive words
just try to be happy next time
you're muslim so you should be happy and satisfied all the time
keep writing
peace
:)

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

Don't be sad Brow !!

I will wake you up to a new day

A day full of joy N success

Don't give up ,

There is no life with despair and no desperation with life



Wonderful writing ^^


Keep it like that all the time

GuD luck


a new day, full of joy N success ..... I hope sOoOoOoo

Nice comment

ThAnKs

:19: :) :19:

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

nice poem...expressive words
just try to be happy next time
you're muslim so you should be happy and satisfied all the time
keep writing
peace
:)

Oui , c'est right

I have honor to be a Muslim

Merci you sister

[لـُغ ـَهہْ الآرٍُوٍُآحےۦ]

Don't Be Sad Bro cuz sadness make Pro

So Be hapPy and don't care


Good Job I like it

[** مريم **]

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته

Hello my friend ,

I like your poem

it's written with deep sincerity

I like it very much

Hope that I will take a pleasure to read again and again .

Dno't stop please

thank you.

[نعمة القدوس]

.. }

Hey sad guy


remember me ?

..


I have a few words for ya

"
you're not alone
together we stand
I'll be by your side you know I'll take your hand
"

Accedentaly, those are a song lyrics

hhh


don't think for a moment that I could say such things like that

anyway

I just saw your name, then had the idea to pass by
so, I found your poem

and remembered when you used to force me to read them
and write a reply


what's a wonderful time !

<< are you smiling or not yet ?


At the end, I wish you luck

be strong and you will get them all

Insha2 Allah

+

If you need me

just ask in one of my topics

cuz I allways check them when I log in


Ssalèèm



<< You supose to smile by now ? did ya ?





I did : )

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

Heeeyy teacher !!!

I didn't beleive when I saw your name in

my topic ( I knew that I'll read a long

comment ... and I were right )

You said : " remember me ? "

How can I forget my teacher :mad: ( The

Maja3a ) !!!!

Ah .... I liked the song ( But I knew That

you're nOt a pOeT like Me ...hHh )

and remembered when you used to force me to read them

and write a reply
HHhHH ..... Yes I can't forget these moments ... :) I'm sMiling

Thank you sis for these words ... I hope you

get good marks and become the first and

the best one in your

class

Your glad brother :rolleyes:

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

Don't Be Sad Bro cuz sadness make Pro

So Be hapPy and don't care


Good Job I like it

Aha .... I'm happy , now .

Thank YoU sister

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

و عليكم السلام و رحمة الله و بركاته

Hello my friend ,

I like your poem

it's written with deep sincerity

I like it very much

Hope that I will take a pleasure to read again and again .

Dno't stop please

thank you.




Merci bien

Tha,nk you cuz you liked it

:19: :)

[amouna23]

I like your poem so much^^

[{ حديث الوجدان }]

I like your poem so much^^

ThankS

:) :) :rolleyes: :19:

[gothica ruby]

sister i really liked that quote ....wow ....wish ya gd luck
keep it up \m/l

[Makadam]

short things are the best
and live is short too
so don't be sad :-)

[سارة1995]

nice poem sweetie
i liked ur nice topic =)
thank u

[sousoumiley]

I Simply LIKE IT !!!!!!!! it's soooo nice :)

[rola.29]

Hello ,
ok nice words.. but why is everybody sad?? hhhh
WE ARE ALL SAD !!!! :mad:
nice words .. really keep going :19:
thanks

[سارة1995]

nice poem^^