Life is a game

[المستعينة بالله]

السّلام عليكم

هذه أوّل كتابة لي في هذا القسم

أرجو أن تعجبكم الكتابة

I wrote this when I was in bad mood

"Life is a game"

Life is a game

There is a winner and there is a loser

So you are the player

You need to be a hunter

To be the winner

Everything is a lie

There is no lover

Because the game will be over

Everything aginst you

There is no sister

There is just the killer

So you mustn't be a failure

Because no one can help you

No mother no father

There is no brother

You are in the picture

So you need to be a hunter

You must be a good fighter

So do it better

To win this game faster

And to be the master

If you wanna be the winner

And if you are the loser

Life will say :"the game is over "

"and you can't try again"

"and Ican't wait"

"because you are late"

أتمنى أن يعجبكم هذا

your sister

[المستعينة بالله]

say it's good or it's bad that all

!!!!

[+وئام]

wow! you were very upset when you wrote it that's for sure.....

it's nice but you forgot that there are who help in (this game) ....

[mnh]

veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy niiiiiiice thanx i like it <3 <3

[المستعينة بالله]

wow! you were very upset when you wrote it that's for sure.....

it's nice but you forgot that there are who help in (this game) ....

hhhhh

thank you

I'll never forget

but sometimes I feel that no one can help me


and suddenly I say there is god who can help us always

good luck sis

[المستعينة بالله]

veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy niiiiiiice thanx i like it <3 <3

ah thank you

that words makes me happy

good luck

[المستعينة بالله]

I think that the most of people are always in mood

hhhhhh

[+وئام]

hhhhh

thank you

I'll never forget

but sometimes I feel that no one can help me


and suddenly I say there is god who can help us always

good luck sis


thanks ^_^

there is always someone beside you

good luck to you too :)

[منارة الحق]

yes, of cource life is a game . but do not forget that we take part in our faillure
and beleive me in this time u have to depend on yourself

[المستعينة بالله]

yes, of cource life is a game . but do not forget that we take part in our faillure
and beleive me in this time u have to depend on yourself

thank you sis I'll never forget your words

good luck

[المستعينة بالله]

بصراحة كنت أنتظر تشجيعا أكثر و هذا ثبّط نشاطي

I' need some encouragement from you to continue

and if there is an advice just tell me I' ll accept it

[المستعينة بالله]

ok ok

I understand now

you like poems that contain a good words

I'll try to write it next time inshallah

see you later

[wafa kabylie]

اتمنى لكي تقدما راقيا فهي رائعة حقا

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you my best friend

good luck

[wafa kabylie]

thank you my best friend

good luck
you are welcome

[safioo]

Everything is a lie

There is no lover

Because the game will be over


beautiful words
thank
you sis

[الوليـــــد]

I like it. but you get so sad.

[المستعينة بالله]

Everything is a lie

There is no lover

Because the game will be over


beautiful words
thank
you sis

I am happy sis because you like it

good luck

[المستعينة بالله]

I like it. but you get so sad.

yes that is true

thank you brother

good luck

[good12]

thank you you are believe that the life is game good luck:mh92:

[سارة1995]

Really I like this thought
Thanks

!! life is pain

[المستعينة بالله]

I want to say thanks to all of you sisters and brothers

[old young miss]

wow miss i will never forget this words


it's really nice


i like it

thank you

[المستعينة بالله]

wow miss i will never forget this words


it's really nice


i like it

thank you

Ah I am happy because you like it

goodbye

[.kiki]

My dear sister, we all face troubles in our lives.. and you're definitely right about the fighting part, we should keep fighting.. but honey!! NEVER TAKE LIFE SERIOUSLY, NOBODY GETS OUT ALIVE ANYWAY! thta's what I learnt from all my experiences..

but it's good to write down your feelings when you're sad, it's kind of relaxing when you write it all out..

there's nothing wrong with expressing ourselves, so don't be shy that you were sad once.. we all were. Thank you, for sharing us your lovely words, dear

good luck, and take care of yourself

[mnh]

ah thank you

that words makes me happy

good luck


U r wlcm my sister good luck to you too <3

[mnh]

I want to put it on fcb sis if you agreewith me :) ;)

[martha kasar]

thank you my dear it's words from gold ii wish that you advance us best of the best

[المستعينة بالله]

My dear sister, we all face troubles in our lives.. and you're definitely right about the fighting part, we should keep fighting.. but honey!! NEVER TAKE LIFE SERIOUSLY, NOBODY GETS OUT ALIVE ANYWAY! thta's what I learnt from all my experiences..

but it's good to write down your feelings when you're sad, it's kind of relaxing when you write it all out..

there's nothing wrong with expressing ourselves, so don't be shy that you were sad once.. we all were. Thank you, for sharing us your lovely words, dear

good luck, and take care of yourself

thank you very much sister

all of people suffer in this life but the good one who can face it at least with some words

life is hard

but I'm happy and I love my life

life make us poets

good luck sis

[المستعينة بالله]

I want to put it on fcb sis if you agreewith me :) ;)

no problem

I am agree with you sis

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you my dear it's words from gold ii wish that you advance us best of the best


thank you for your interaction sister

I hop to you good life

good luck:)

[ziaya]

realy realy realy owsommmmmmmmmmm cooooooool siss

[freedoom]

This poem makes me cry

[المستعينة بالله]

realy realy realy owsommmmmmmmmmm cooooooool siss

thank you sister

you make me strong

[المستعينة بالله]

This poem makes me cry

take it easy

this is the life and we can't change it

[mnh]

no problem

I am agree with you sis

ah it's ok thanx a lot my dear

[ينابيع الصفاء]

love is a losing game

[amani b]

a really good words

and this is life

and life is nothing but a test we gotta be patient after all

thanks

[la manita]

nice production just carry on

[مراد تيقنطوشث]

hello i really like your poem and i ask allah to give you some courageous tomorrow and don't despair and never lose hope because allah is always by your side
remmember me for your mum
you know who am i ? i am your best friend the daugter of your uncle
كان الله في عونك

[المستعينة بالله]

thanks to all of you

next poem will be about the memories

wait me

goodbye

[المستعينة بالله]

hello i really like your poem and i ask allah to give you some courageous tomorrow and don't despair and never lose hope because allah is always by your side
remmember me for your mum
you know who am i ? i am your best friend the daugter of your uncle
كان الله في عونك

hi nihad how are you

don't worry I'm fine am waiting for results

and I'm so hopeful now

ah I think the song of maher zain affect you hhhhhhhh

I hope to you a good life

[Sadinne]

Hey there =D

So, first of all I really related to your poem, because sometimes I feel exactly the same way about life, like I'm alone and there's no one out there for me that can help me or that I can trust ^^

But, I'll admit that it was a little bit repetitive, as if you were repeating the same verse over over, like the idea wasn't evaluating or something, and you were usinf the same words over and over again...But over all it was okay ^^

You should keep writing, especially if it makes you feel better =D

[rola.29]

WAW !! it's wonderful, i really liked it
i wish you good luck .. happy to meet you
keep writting

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you sisters

good luck

[لالة مريومة]

woow thank you

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you....................

[amir kh]

wow so cooooooool thank u sistaaaa....miro prince

[Jimmy The Rap Soldie]

السّلام عليكم

هذه أوّل كتابة لي في هذا القسم

أرجو أن تعجبكم الكتابة

I wrote this when I was in bad mood

"Life is a game"

Life is a game

There is a winner and there is a loser

So you are the player

You need to be a hunter

To be the winner

Everything is a lie

There is no lover

Because the game will be over

Everything aginst you

There is no sister

There is just the killer

So you mustn't be a failure

Because no one can help you

No mother no father

There is no brother

You are in the picture

So you need to be a hunter

You must be a good fighter

So do it better

To win this game faster

And to be the master

If you wanna be the winner

And if you are the loser

Life will say :"the game is over "

"and you can't try again"

"and Ican't wait"

"because you are late"

أتمنى أن يعجبكم هذا

your sister


best greetings sis
i hope you're doing fine
^^
well
it's a very beautiful poem
but dark
you really managed to express the emotions and mood you were going through
.....
yeah ... actually life's a game
...
and may be more than a just a game
..
some times i even see it like an evil spirit
.
separates people ... and then gathers them again just so she can separate them once more .. just to have fun
^^
i can see through your poem that you were extremely mad
really
when you manage to express your feelings this perfectly means that you're a very good writer
...
I'm really exited to see more from you
....
thanks for sharing sis
...
sorry about talking very much
..
hhhh
.
keep it up and do never give up
^^
your bro ... jimmy
^^

[منال2009]

it's really very nice
good luck

[أسماء أماني*]

Very godddddddd dear,
Keep smiling

[المستعينة بالله]

thank you all of you