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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Thirsty for love

Karim_Rap_4_life

2011-12-31, 14:13

Title:
Thirsty for love
By:
Karim Cherifi

I was lost in my thought
in the lonliness that I got
Psut Psut psut
Karim rim im m
Above the rim im m
suddenly I heared soft voice
I tried to not make a noise
I just kept the poise
because I had no choise
I did decide to look inside
Nothing I recognized
My mind was my guide
Told me to not hide
I went outside
The place was wide
Going through the eastside
or the westside
I had to know
where I should Go
But I didn't know

The voice is calling again
An open Gate eit...eit...eit
I Compensate
Karim celibrate eit...eit...eit

A beautiful Lassie eventually
She was running so quickly
I followed her to the party there
I had to enter there were no garder
An incredible so nice Girls were there
I can't compare
I asked but no one care
they kept to stare
I went upstair
I got her Disapear
I beg her to Reapear
I felt her so near
I just found Her nice smell
I stand on the wall I could fall
I couldn't controll
I still recall
The smile She drew
before She had to go
I walked throught the door
Among the lassies dancing on the floor
Shouting Mr Romance Romance
Please give us one more chance
I didn't take a glance
It would be a bad consequence
avoiding the previous Instance
I saw Marcedece Bense
Some one pushed me in
She was there again saying
I'm here to move the pain
I give you the love you abstain
No more time to complain
Forget the pain you did obtain
I felt so happy and insane
I can't believe this
a world of fantasy
A soft voice saying my name
for one more time
I exclaim she is with me
so who is calling me?

Get up get up son
it's time to go home
A nurse waking me up
to walk home
she said
It was a hard crisis
be patient stay strong
try to forget her she is a deciever
she don't even consider

تابتي

2011-12-31, 14:21

belle parole karim

maymay

2011-12-31, 14:24

Karim_Rap_4_life

2011-12-31, 14:47

I guess that one took you more than 30 mn :1:

it s a nice one,keep up the good work

just a question,does it mean that you were sleepin and all that was a beautiful dream?or what?perhaps i dont get you right!

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees it was a dream ofcourse but in a hard day of my life and the story telling some facts about my life

Karim_Rap_4_life

2011-12-31, 14:48

belle parole karim

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuu

newflower

2011-12-31, 15:05

tooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet
I like it
u knw what start t addict ur writings and words
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

maymay

2011-12-31, 15:07

yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees it was a dream ofcourse but in a hard day of my life and the story telling some facts about my life

well,I hope your life would be as beautiful as that dream

Karim_Rap_4_life

2011-12-31, 15:25

tooooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeet
I like it
u knw what start t addict ur writings and words
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu Flower

ilina 07

2011-12-31, 18:49

amazing poem karim as usuall..keep on writing freind cause your poems are great...ohh i almost forgot Happy New Year wish you all the best,success and of course a lot of love

حكاية قلب

2011-12-31, 19:59

Words Well Chosen
Sweet Honest Words
.
Bad Conclusion
><

But Still Good Poem
^p:
Keep On Karim
You are So Good
^.^

My Best Wishes

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-01-01, 11:18

amazing poem karim as usuall..keep on writing freind cause your poems are great...ohh i almost forgot Happy New Year wish you all the best,success and of course a lot of love

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii....thank you My friend for passing I hope you like it........Thank youoooooooooooooooooooooooooooou

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-01-01, 11:26

Words Well Chosen
Sweet Honest Words
.
Bad Conclusion
><

But Still Good Poem
^p:
Keep On Karim
You are So Good
^.^

My Best Wishes

yes yes yes thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu__good luck to you too my friend

rock-girl46

2012-01-01, 19:13

beleive me i feel the same way.......happy new year2012

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-01-02, 14:06

beleive me i feel the same way.......happy new year2012

yeah thank you the fact I did it the same because I feel that I share it with some ones who live the same case and that's so sad pffff dreams ha ha meet a nice girl and when you wake up you find nothing but pain?

malak-023

2012-03-16, 13:41

were you in th hospital but really a great poem

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-16, 17:14

were you in th hospital but really a great poem

Hhhhhhhh a right question....thank you

ابتساام

2012-03-16, 17:57

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
you make me live in this story
great

sara attoui

2012-03-16, 18:55

wow allah ybarek

nice lyrics dude

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-17, 11:28

hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
you make me live in this story
great

Hhhhh that's my objective from my poems I want the reader to live in inorder to understand what the meaning is

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-17, 11:29

wow allah ybarek

nice lyrics dude

Thank you for passing

abdo1996

2012-03-17, 11:31

you can drink water because you are thirsty...................................... love hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

abdo1996

2012-03-17, 11:32

وضح احسن لك
انت عطشان ماء ام حب ؟
حلل وناقش يا عطشان .................................................. ...

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-17, 18:49

yeah Mrs I used to be thirsty for love but not now...Love is a disease chou chou

ابتساام

2012-03-18, 19:13

you used ****phor
I translate all my senses to nature
You are already staggering
Your experience of poetry is true
Because you made us live in your poem, moment by moment
Keep on

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-18, 19:36

وضح احسن لك
انت عطشان ماء ام حب ؟
حلل وناقش يا عطشان .................................................. ...

بعد التحليل الدي قام به أستادك..........أنا أعتقد أنه في الحالتين لا يوجد خلل أو عطل ,انما عندما يكون الشخص عطشان للاحترام فأنا أرى أن هدا هو المشكل الدي يبقى مطروح.......حلل و ناقش

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-18, 19:38

you used ****phor
I translate all my senses to nature
You are already staggering
Your experience of poetry is true
Because you made us live in your poem, moment by moment
Keep on

thanks a lot for your passing and confess........it is rarely to find someone who reveal and tell the truth when they see something good but the problem is that there are some idots could not say nuttin' cuz they are jealouse and that's killing the creativity.......thank you Ibtisam"you're apreciated

maymay

2012-03-19, 09:42

بعد التحليل الدي قام به أستادك..........أنا أعتقد أنه في الحالتين لا يوجد خلل أو عطل ,انما عندما يكون الشخص عطشان للاحترام فأنا أرى أن هدا هو المشكل الدي يبقى مطروح.......حلل و ناقش

But bro,I see that everybody in here respect you ..and you respect them back,if it's about people in your environment then believe me the one who disrespects you is disrespecting himself and does not deserve to be called a human-being....so when you face that position be grateful towards that person bcz he made you realize how great you are...

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-19, 13:55

But bro,I see that everybody in here respect you ..and you respect them back,if it's about people in your environment then believe me the one who disrespects you is disrespecting himself and does not deserve to be called a human-being....so when you face that position be grateful towards that person bcz he made you realize how great you are...

thank you ...you are telling the truth.........I prefer the ******** of silent but silence is a hight ******** they can't understand it......Thank you I repeatr that I'm happy for your comment you are acting like a civilized person. Thank you

maymay

2012-03-19, 16:04

thank you ...you are telling the truth.........I prefer the ******** of silent but silence is a hight ******** they can't understand it......Thank you I repeatr that I'm happy for your comment you are acting like a civilized person. Thank you

Sorry bro,but i feel like your saying that i wasnt civilized!!!I thought we cleared that n agreed that it was a misunderstanding...sorry again if you still think i meant it...

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-19, 17:27

Sorry bro,but i feel like your saying that i wasnt civilized!!!I thought we cleared that n agreed that it was a misunderstanding...sorry again if you still think i meant it...

no forget that damn day I'm just saying the truth there is nothing don't be disapointed

maymay

2012-03-20, 10:18

no forget that damn day I'm just saying the truth there is nothing don't be disapointed

Glad to hear that bro...Thanks

ابتساام

2012-03-20, 19:14

I always tell the truth this poem deserves praise
Do not worry because there are some people trying to make you come down to the ground but your personality and your strength will not let them achieve their goal
When you find someone express with sincerity what is in his heart, I encourage him
I am not of the type that likes to hurt others
Please continue you are a talented poet

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-20, 19:20

Black_Poison

2012-03-21, 00:57

only a great tallent can produce such a great poem
i enjoyed reading it to the last word
keep it up

Karim_Rap_4_life

2012-03-21, 19:15

only a great tallent can produce such a great poem
i enjoyed reading it to the last word
keep it up

Thank you for real .....thank you for your passing and for your concern wish u good luck