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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : I wish I could

بلعالم محمد
2011-12-28, 21:38
I wish I could,
Sit here all alone,
Thinking this is okay,
Don’t need anybody tonight,
Just complete silence and the candle light,
And I’d drink my coffee,
Wouldn’t worry at all… Wouldn’t worry at all,
I would feel fine,
Like I always do,
I would be smiling,
Laughing too,
Don’t need anybody,
Least of all you,
And then I would convince myself it’s true,
It’s true,
I wish I could,
Stare at the wall ,
And see something different everytime,
Evrytime,
The candle wouldn’t stop burning ,
I could lay down ,
And I wouldn’t be crying ,
I would feel fine ,
Like I always do,
I would be smiling,
Laughing too,
Don’t need anybody,
Least of all you,
And then I would convince myself it’s true,
احسان2
2011-12-31, 22:28
i wish you could
بلعالم محمد
2012-01-05, 12:25
we wish we could
wiam sarah
2015-11-12, 21:33
we all wish we could
nana47
2015-12-15, 18:21
we pray god that we will could some day
thank's that was nice for me to read your words :)
azaz
2016-01-11, 20:59
This is so beautiful!
It is a pity that it has been posted so long ago and still there are not many replies.
I believe gems like this should be appreciated more...

What I like about this piece is that it is simple, to the point, and well written.
It touches the reader because it is something that anyone could go through. So, it is as real as it can be.
Also, the repetition of the message gives the poem a musical feel and makes the meaning of the words even stronger.

I really like this and I would love to read more of the writer's work!
AhmedDizad
2016-01-24, 17:50
so nice . so beuatifull so smart
Southpaw
2016-03-23, 01:02
Wishing ! All what we left
Moustafa.KD
2016-06-07, 20:38
Open your heart and fall in love dont hide who you are be proud
نميرة 08
2016-06-11, 15:03
Hello. Howdy bro?
You know what? We all know how to wish but what really makes the difference is how to stop wishing and start making it true. We do not need wishing any more ^^
Eventhough you did a great job nice peom keep it up !
Nani4002
2016-10-07, 17:47
We have to stop wishing, and start acting for real, wishing can't and won't fulfill our goals unless we make it true.
azeddine1988
2018-01-14, 21:57
d'ont you ever whish man
just do
ihabagfa
2018-02-08, 19:31
just do it my friend and don't you ever regret anything you do except when it's against what our religion says
oussgamer
2019-10-31, 10:00
I won't wish you could, because i know you could
The Cannari
2020-01-09, 23:46
BBeautiful. Strong and sad at the same time. Loneliness can be strength sometimes, well, it has to.