♥ I Love(d) You

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I Love(d) You

by: Rofaida




it's an stupid purpose
for thinking of you all the time
keep on saying
why did this dream had to end
after i start trust my heart
i know you ingored the feelings
that made us be together that time
but i still remeber all the moments we spend
all the talk you said
and all the feelings you shown

with all the tears i felt
not a day and not a night
it was hard days and painful nights
you turned my pink dreams
to a black nightmares
so i couldn't know whats good and whats bad
of letting my heart swim in this pain
i didnt do anything wrong
but u made me feel guilty all the time
you made me love you
and you made me hate you
in the same while
Like it wasn't a tool to blame my soul
for accepting you in my world

how can i trust my heart again with this
damn pain
stupid things happend to me
like an earthquakes
Changing my life
making my soft dreams disappear
making my world just a mess
Destroying my soul
Spoiling all the hopes that i build
for saving you forever
as the only One

waking up everyday feels the tears on my cheeks
thinking what i did to deseve all this pain
but now i realized that you're the only one
who should think of a bleeding heart
you killed with your cold knife
a girl you made her loves you
then you let her go
saying that it's her fault for all whats happining
it was a fantasy that i tried to put you once in my life
a mistake i'll never redo it again


it was a disaster that i made your name next mine
i must delete you're shadow forever this life
cause you were for me just a ghost
and now i don't believe in them anymore
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On : 11:51
19/11/2011

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i did it on Purpos this Words Shakining
cause i love to make a little mess in my writes
Please Let me See how do u found it
your Views so importent to me

Thank you
^.^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hi Rofaida How are doing___I want to Inform you that I'm going to copy your poem and take it home and read it in my own host and read it carefully because I'm right outside and I can't concentrate so I'm sorry I'm going to be late to comment okey

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Hi Karim_i'm Fine thx
Dnt be Sorry frnd


It's Okey
take ur time

waiting for ur Comment



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[khado586]

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[2ne1girl]

i loved it it's great
thanks

[حكاية قلب]

i loved it it's great
thanks



Thank u Girl and ur Wélcome
^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hiiiiiiiiii it was nice to read your topic

First I would like to start with The Title
I know why you write (d) between Brakets
Inorder to focus that the love was in the past
keep making tricks like that Girl
By the way I found it amazing for real

Your words means that You got deceived ofcourse
a love matter doesn't it I can feel that the same I got....


There is something I would like you to tell me
about...Is this one a poem or a thought?
With all my respect I can see that it is a thought
because it contain less rhymes as I notice
I think Girls have a strong imagination than Boys
as you are doing right here....I liked the way you
made similes really.
For me it looks so good but my advice is if you want it
to seem like a strong poem you need to find more
rhymes..

Don't be disapointed My Friend I can't let you without
an alert I'm just want to advice you because we are
right here to learn so I study eatch poem carefully
inorder to share it and learn from it and if I got something
to say I should say it Okey.

As got a few experience in writing i would like to
inform you that I'm going to publish a brand new topic
about how to write a poem I don't how it will seem to
members right here I know I'm not the one who suppose to
write such a topic but when some ones say that my
topics are a lilttle bit amaing that means that I should
give a justification or a plan of how I write my own poems
Because I noticed that no one would give as an advices
on how to make a real poem......just wait for my topic
for a few next days Inchallah...God bless you

[حكاية قلب]

Hiiiiiiiiii it was nice to read your topicOhh Thank you a lot this is means to me a lot thank u thank u thank u
^.^





First I would like to start with The Title

I know why you write (d) between Brakets

Inorder to focus that the love was in the past

keep making tricks like that Girl



Yes i did it on purpose first i wanted to make it i love u than i loved u than i said i cant make them both
for that i made the d between braketes
^^
By the wayI found it amazing for real

Your words means that You got deceived ofcourse

a love matter doesn't it I can feel that the same I got....

There is something I would like you to tell me

about...Is this one a poem or a thought?

With all my respect I can see that it is a thought
Yes Yes i didnt said that's is a poem cause i dnt write poems a lot
and if i said it must be a mistake
thanks for the attention
^.^

I think Girls have a strong imagination than Boys

as you are doing right here....I liked the way you

made similes really.
Thank u yes i like this kinda of writings so much

For me it looks so good but my advice is if you want it

to seem like a strong poem you need to find more

rhymes..
yees i guess it's my problem u know hhhhhh
thank i'll try to use more of it really
^^
.

Don't be disapointed My Friend I can't let you without

an alert I'm just want to advice you because we are

right here to learn so I study eatch poem carefully

inorder to share it and learn from it and if I got something

to say I should say it Okey
ohhh what re u saying it's really my pleasure
noooo...my luck to get advices from a Big teacher like u
hhhh yes i found u such a great teacher
it's means to me a lot
ur advices and ur notes
Thank u a lotttt
^^
.j
As got a few experience in writing i would like to

inform you that I'm going to publish a brand new topic

about how to write a poem I don't how it will seem to

members right here I know I'm not the one who suppose to

write such a topic but when some ones say that my

topics are a lilttle bit amaing that means that I should

give a justification or a plan of how I write my own poems

Because I noticed that no one would give as an advices

on how to make a real poem.....
yaaay ok i'll be waiting for this really cause as u know i'm not really good enough writing poems
Thank you thanks a lot

for a few next days Inchallah...God bless you
i'll be waiting
God bless u too

^.^