Hopeless

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

When i'm feeling disturbed by something
Very bad but whatever I keep struggling
what can I do is what I do who know
I feel that I'm beaten by a knife
how many friends i have in my life
every thing seem so bad never understand
the matter that I did nothing bad by my hand
See me hustling try to keep myself cool
Imagine me like big shirk in swiming pool
You never understand me you never 4 ever
It'm me it's no other you got to try harder
I am just want to be myself no crying
yes I cry so many times that's heppening
see me laugh see me smile for a while
Cant' believe this it's like a Gangsta style
all the time left is to be sad I don't know why
people got a life full of a lie I see with my eye
I never understand and never comprehend
that's the life is going away from my hand
or the problems that I'm dealing are a grand
loved by a few too many bad ones I knew
One or two friend maybe I'll chose you
karim is two doing what it pose to do
when I'm good i'm better you can get through
when I'm bad It's the worse thing force a throat
keep your self safe and far from the dark
I'm comming from the dark I got a mind full of black
see my enemies waitng on my block
so I am right here I don't care I've to dare
my foe you came in the panic square
shut your mouth you better feel me
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Hey friends don't be disappointed
that's my words I feel confused
I'm just playing with that damn words
Got me chasing that rhymes to get a real poem
doing like that every day attention gotta pay
and it just seem comfortable to me when I'm writing
such a poems I'm karim feel me don't blame me
because it's a shame hurt any one i'm disciplined
so friends don't left me
I'm doing like that to get rid of pain see you again

[ilina 07]

well i think that this poem is amazing i'm not dissappointed at all ...I think that this one is more about you ...it describe your deep feelings and it shows your pain and your saidness.....i honnestly love this poem.....and i really hope that my comment will draw a smile on your face ....thank you for your amazing words ...god bless you karim

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

well i think that this poem is amazing i'm not dissappointed at all ...I think that this one is more about you ...it describe your deep feelings and it shows your pain and your saidness.....i honnestly love this poem.....and i really hope that my comment will draw a smile on your face ....thank you for your amazing words ...god bless you karim

Thanks a lot My Friend for your encouraging I really appreciate Your view thank you so much keep on touch

[حكاية قلب]

i loved it

you seems so evil but it's ok
i like the strong ones u know
hhhhhh

don't think i'm blaming you don't......)
hhhhhh)

it's so strong words i loved it so much
especially
this one


when I'm good i'm better you can get through
when I'm bad It's the worse thing force a throat
keep your self safe and far from the dark
/
/
^^
keep like showing us ur poems

i 'm learning so much from u
really

thx

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Yeah thank you Girl....I'm learning from your words too
It's simple....you know every body has a side shine all the time but there is a dark side just like the moon....
There something you forgot....press the Thank you Botton it's free that's the sumarry hhhhhhh you know what I mean

[حكاية قلب]

Yeah thank you Girl....I'm learning from your words too
It's simple....you know every body has a side shine all the time but there is a dark side just like the moon....
There something you forgot....press the Thank you Botton it's free that's the sumarry hhhhhhh you know what I mean



hhhhhhhhhhhh
loooooool

the botton....yeah i know!
but i prefer to say it
p:
u know what i mean
it's more meaninful

^.^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Me I press Thank you botton to evry friend I have and write so many words n the commenbts you know my style that's mean so much hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh____whenever you type thanks botton hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the much you get notes hhhh

[حكاية قلب]

Me I press Thank you botton to evry friend I have and write so many words n the commenbts you know my style that's mean so much hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh____whenever you type thanks botton hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh the much you get notes hhhh


not always i press it
sometimes i forget to
p:
.
.

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

You forget or forget hhhhhhhhhhh For me it's the first thing I do look for every topic of you I'm the one who always press Thank you hhhhhhhhhhhh I overcame you shin Shyn hhhhhhh :p

[حكاية قلب]

Ok Ok

i 'm Giving up

i confess ur power in pressing that boton

hhhhhhhhh

but i'll beat u next time don't
worry

p:

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

ohoh hhhhhahahahahahhahahahhahahahhahah ;p that's too funny you beat me hhhhhhhahahah
Okey i' right here to beat me if that suit you .........when I read it I laughed too much hhhhhh it's so funny yeah I annoyed Girl hh

[maymay]

[QUOTE=Karim_Rap_4_life;8194350]When i'm feeling disturbed by something
Very bad but whatever I keep struggling
what can I do is what I do who know
I feel that I'm beaten by a knife
how many friends i have in my life
every thing seem so bad never understand
the matter that I did nothing bad by my hand
See me hustling try to keep myself cool
Imagine me like big shirk in swiming pool
You never understand me you never 4 ever
It'm me it's no other you got to try harder
I am just want to be myself no crying
yes I cry so many times that's heppening
see me laugh see me smile for a while
Cant' believe this it's like a Gangsta style
all the time left is to be sad I don't know why
people got a life full of a lie I see with my eye
I never understand and never comprehend
that's the life is going away from my hand
or the problems that I'm dealing are a grand
loved by a few too many bad ones I knew
One or two friend maybe I'll chose you





through this entire part,I felt like you were tellin my life story,I remembered the song that says

strumming my pain with his fingers
Singing my life with his words
Killing me softly with his song ..killing me softly..
telling my whole life with his words

cheer up bro,nothing is worth it

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

through this entire part,I felt like you were tellin my life story,I remembered the song that says

strumming my pain with his fingers
Singing my life with his words
Killing me softly with his song ..killing me softly..
telling my whole life with his words

cheer up bro,nothing is worth it[/QUOTE]

thank youuuuuuuuuuuu you're welcome and thanks a lot for puuting your comments :)

[Natali3]

Hello ,,, every one here








I think that ,, Nice words from the owner
the most beautiful

I guess that you have a lot to show it to us





God bless you

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hello ,,, every one here








I think that ,, Nice words from the owner
the most beautiful

I guess that you have a lot to show it to us





God bless you


Yeah thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu for your special passing thank you ad If you want to follow some of my writing just visit my profile I have many ones just read them hhh thank youuuuuuuuuuuu

[SiliaOnly]

I have enjoyed reading this poem
it is so confusing the thing that I like the most in poetry
carry on in the same style

[Natali3]

Hey … Karim





Actually… I find your way


in write a poems so special


you are creative and

You have great talent in writing…. In fact I will set up a small party
to my friends




and I want you to help me
in writing something special
just to show how I love and respect them




because I found your words




more expressive and and so exciting So I hope that you can give me some from your a nice words …



please do not disappoint me …. I'am waiting your answer



I need it Tuesday







*** Insha Allah ***

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

I have enjoyed reading this poem
it is so confusing the thing that I like the most in poetry
carry on in the same style

thank you for passing and encouraging me thank you

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hey … Karim





Actually… I find your way


in write a poems so special


youare creative and

You have great talent in writing…. In fact I will set up a small party
to my friends




and I want you to help me
in writing something special
just to show how I love and respect them




because I found your words




more expressive and and so exciting So I hope that you can give me some from your a nice words …



please do not disappoint me …. I'am waiting your answer



I need it Tuesday







*** Insha Allah ***


first of all you're welcome and iI have aready wrote a topic about how I write poems here is the link follow it:




http://www.djelfa.info/vb/showthread.php?t=816851

[Natali3]

really ..I thank you very much for your help
and I promise you I will try to do my best
for that

Wished me good luck

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

really ..I thank you very much for your help
and I promise you I will try to do my best
for that

Wished me good luck

Good luck 4 you and your friends and every body here and If one day I have time I'll joing your group to have some poems about life okeyyyyyyyyyyyy

[Natali3]

Yes ... it will be a wonderful thing

[Natali3]

But you know what
It is very difficult to write peoms


God give you health

[سارة1995]

! u have no idea how much I like it
keep goin' bro

[Black_Poison]

thank you brother for the great poems
you are a master
you know what some lines were talking about me and my life
keep it up
i'm waiting for yr news

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

thank you brother for the great poems
you are a master
you know what some lines were talking about me and my life
keep it up
i'm waiting for yr news

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