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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : To My Friend


Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-12-07, 18:46
IIt's a true feeling nothing Else
For the rhymes I just wrote it in a hurry
the fact that I feel so sad

just remember Yeah I just remember
For The one who used to be my arm
The one to whom I used to be an arm
Damn Man damn what was that
Words are out of description
My world to you is missing
that hurts when you're messing
Remember what was our mission
Our Friendship is passing
god damn that hurts pay attention
Nothing left everything is done it's gone
You said words a lot of offenses
A mountain of loveliness was fell down
that words I never forget that realy hurt
If I was You I never do that I never
How I do that for my Friend
I prefer to die instead of saying that
Remember that days Remember that places
where we used to be hunging around
that times were really unforgetable
laughing talking shouting rappin
beatboxing words of fantazy
now what i've is crying see you passing
hoping hear you saying my name
i don't care what you feel but it's a shame
never have a friend like me
we always used to be homeboys
I never forget that I never want to pass
We traveled from childhood to the younghood
I'm lonely in the hood i feel no good
Can't Imagine this My best Friend
I'm passing just next to you
no word no smile no thing at all
pffff hhahah it's just like I don't know you
I've no friend except you friend
Now all what we had is deleted
I remember I recall I feel I see I hear
all things we did al places all jokes
what I feel is sadness I can't Imagine man
That hurt man That hurts yeah that hurts
Wish you good luck in the name of brotherhood
Remember that you start hurts not me
Thank you for that I learned too many lessons
i've nothing to say anymore I don't care if you go
If you comeback you're welcome
If you don't good luck
I can't stay running behind you
Remeber I am a Man
Damn to friendship if I loose my principals

newflower
2011-12-07, 19:34
oh that's amaising.. hope u start over and forget your problem
just break the ice than i b there to say
BREAK A LEG (ie good luck brother)

PC: hey i have two participation and i will be glad to hv look on it....hope u remember ir m ur friend of idioms..:mh92:

حكاية قلب
2011-12-07, 20:25
Damn...
Words Of Ice
Full Of wondering

what the hell it's hapenin ?

Hot tears in the checks
How Much you were
Cold..and you still !!

How Much it was
Real...and it's Gone

Fells Like The Only One
Feel Like you're Just a Gohst

I wanna Let it Go..But,
Is that Possible ?

.
.
.
I remember I recall I feel I see I hear
all things we did al places all jokes

it was the best words for me
that touched me more
like the same what i'm passing in
.
.
You
feels so much pain .. i know
But try to forget
Cause it's the Only Thing
that will Makes you Live again
feel the life again

don't give up
No more tears no more pain
.

My New Rule
"
i'll Never Give Up
THis will Never
Stop me...

Searching for LOve
searching for peace
making my dreams

Come alive
"

^.^

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-12-08, 11:38
oh that's amaising.. hope u start over and forget your problem
just break the ice than i b there to say
BREAK A LEG (ie good luck brother)

PC: hey i have two participation and i will be glad to hv look on it....hope u remember ir m ur friend of idioms..:mh92:

Oh that's so nice from you it please me when I see your comments right here on my own writing cause that make you do something like eraser in my life because that's my own affairs hhahhhaha and you are just acting like my real friend keep doing like that and you're so appreciated GIRL....I really love that you're so kind okey____for the participation you have done i don't know where exactly where it is located at??? so please give me thge right ******** ort the right part of these forum you published that kind of works okey please!!!!*

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-12-08, 11:39
Damn...
Words Of Ice
Full Of wondering

what the hell it's hapenin ?

Hot tears in the checks
How Much you were
Cold..and you still !!

How Much it was
Real...and it's Gone

Fells Like The Only One
Feel Like you're Just a Gohst

I wanna Let it Go..But,
Is that Possible ?

.
.
.

it was the best words for me
that touched me more
like the same what i'm passing in
.
.
You
feels so much pain .. i know
But try to forget
Cause it's the Only Thing
that will Makes you Live again
feel the life again

don't give up
No more tears no more pain
.

My New Rule
"
i'll Never Give Up
THis will Never
Stop me...

Searching for LOve
searching for peace
making my dreams

Come alive
"

^.^



that right girl for fewx passed days i was giving you some advices abiout friendship you and someothers now i'm the one who need help hhhhh damn to these life it is too strangeous

ilina 07
2011-12-08, 17:50
welcome back karim it's been a while since you wrote us any of your amazing poems .....well i really love this one it talks about a delicate subject which is of course friendship....this word for a lot of people unfortunately doesn't mean a thing ....i really hope that your freind read it so he can understand how mush you care for him ....thank you a lot for these amazing words...god bless you brother

حكاية قلب
2011-12-08, 18:28
that right girl for fewx passed days i was giving you some advices abiout friendship you and someothers now i'm the one who need help hhhhh damn to these life it is too strangeous

yeah...
lol...we call it Destiny

p:
damn it's stronGer
!!

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-12-08, 18:32
welcome back karim it's been a while since you wrote us any of your amazing poems .....well i really love this one it talks about a delicate subject which is of course friendship....this word for a lot of people unfortunately doesn't mean a thing ....i really hope that your freind read it so he can understand how mush you care for him ....thank you a lot for these amazing words...god bless you brother

Oh what that luck Mis Illoina WE miss your writing and comments too i'm so happy toi see your encouraging words happy for that I really adore that okey just keep visiting my writings pokey it's realy so kind to hear that from you Thanks a lot

ilina 07
2011-12-08, 19:53
you are welcom karim.....keep writing wonderful poems and you'll always see my comments...thanx again for your hard working

mounir1
2011-12-08, 20:20
thank you so much you helpe me alot Ihad never thought that there r who like english .
god bless u...

newflower
2011-12-09, 18:41
Oh that's so nice from you it please me when I see your comments right here on my own writing cause that make you do something like eraser in my life because that's my own affairs hhahhhaha and you are just acting like my real friend keep doing like that and you're so appreciated GIRL....I really love that you're so kind okey____for the participation you have done i don't know where exactly where it is located at??? so please give me thge right ******** ort the right part of these forum you published that kind of works okey please!!!!*

hi friend...thanks for your sweet words. ..My participatin is here in the member of writing: description of emotion and the second one is with the notion of missing.....good luck:1::1::1:

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-12-09, 18:47
Ok I'm glad to grab them and read them in my own desk cause i'm just right outside okey so I will show you my point of view just wait okey