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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : a friend


حكاية قلب
2011-12-02, 16:27
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You have been my best friend for the last couple years


We stood together through the laughter and tears


Today the tears are not mutual; they are just in my eyes


I can’t believe my best friend got caught up in these lies



I’ll never turn my back on you, our bond I is too strong


I just wish you would admit what you have done is wrong


I try to support you in whatever choices you make


But if I supported you in this I would be making a mistake



You have stepped on a lot of true friends by making this choice


When I try to talk to you it seems that I have no voice


It hurts so badly when I think of what you have done


I want to leave you behind but I don’t have the courage to run



You were my best friend but I don’t know you anymore




You will never understand how much pain you’ve caused to me

But I’ll still ready to catch you when you’re are ready to fall

رشيد الجزائري01
2011-12-02, 22:12
its the friend that you can call up at 4 a.m that matter.......thanks so so so so so much

حكاية قلب
2011-12-02, 22:25
its the friend that you can call up at 4 a.m that matter.......thanks so so so so so much

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yeah that's do

thank you for
your comment

^^

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-12-03, 13:17
These Poem is the most amazing of your writing
I'm really admired by that kind of words and
balanced lines in these poem your lines are balanced
equally better than mine that keeps your poem look beautiful
the meaning of your poem is so real I liked it...
the part I like too much is

When I try to talk to you it seems that I have no voice
I want to leave you behind but I don’t have the courage to run
But I’ll still ready to catch you when you’re are ready to fall

These sentences I think you should re-write these
it's not too big but a mistake I guess
I try(ied) to support you in whatever choices you made
If I supported you==would make a mistake

keep writing I'm personally here to comment and show you my opinion okey I mean I support like you supported me I still remember that Good luck