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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Friendship is Over!!


ali gourgache
2011-11-29, 10:34
!Friendship is Over
The stars witness my writing

Witness your lying and escaping

Yes,you where you prefer going

Without any thinking or feeling

You let me lonely just staying

Counting the stars and saying

Oh God!I don't believe it

I can't imagine your feeling

I still remember you in my dreaming

I'm just thinking and wondering

Whether you are remembering

The days and the hours....together

Shouting,playing and learning all together

Oh God!! I don't believe it

You!! not she or he or other

Where you promise me to be friends forever

You!!not another

Ijust want you to remember my crying

And I don't want our friendship to be over

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I hope you like it:19::19::19:]

حكاية قلب
2011-11-29, 12:39
woow...it's so sweet
and full of feelings this words
i like it cause
i'm feeling the same

and the most i liked is

And I don't want our friendship to be over

Love it
^.^

ali gourgache
2011-11-29, 14:08
woow...it's so sweet
and full of feelings this words
i like it cause
i'm feeling the same

and the most i liked is

And I don't want our friendship to be over

Love it
^.^

Thanks again and you are the most welcomed member..........this made me very happy and push me for better writings
...............I wish you all the best:mh92:

حكاية قلب
2011-11-29, 14:40
Thanks again and you are the most welcomed member..........this made me very happy and push me for better writings
...............I wish you all the best:mh92:

you're Welcome
i'm Just saying the truth
bout your gift

thank you too for
commenting on my publications

^.^

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-30, 17:15
Good Job Friend really Great.....I do agree with you
that's the way that a normal person feel
when someone trip and left him confused
I must confess the value of friendship is
a least thing to many persons no one appreciate the love
of the others no hot hearts no one care for the other's feelings
those who are dead are those who don't appreciate frienship
those who can"t see what's upon their eyes
Damn you know when you got hurt from a near friend you
can't stop crying or blaming that person and what you
can do is that "Damn is that serious" "I can't believe this"
"he or she run away" hhhhh damn what that hypocrity the people acting!!!
wish your friend be back Inchallah.

ali gourgache
2011-12-01, 14:12
Good Job Friend really Great.....I do agree with you
that's the way that a normal person feel
when someone trip and left him confused
I must confess the value of friendship is
a least thing to many persons no one appreciate the love
of the others no hot hearts no one care for the other's feelings
those who are dead are those who don't appreciate frienship
those who can"t see what's upon their eyes
Damn you know when you got hurt from a near friend you
can't stop crying or blaming that person and what you
can do is that "Damn is that serious" "I can't believe this"
"he or she run away" hhhhh damn what that hypocrity the people acting!!!
wish your friend be back Inchallah.

Thanks Karim..........what can we do? this is life ...........believing on friendship nowaday is something confusing:confused::confused:.......Good Luck and keep doing well too:19::19:

ali gourgache
2012-06-14, 13:26
I'm just thinking and wondering

Whether you are remembering

the days and the ours .....Together
..........

مَجْنُوْنَةٌ أَنَاْ
2012-06-15, 22:54
you're talented

and it's soo good 2

continue the good work bro

miss.cool
2012-06-16, 00:35
amazin

n as u said friendship these days is realy confusin


keep it up

peace

ينابيع الصفاء
2012-06-17, 14:42
Things change.And friends leave. Life doesn’t stop for anybody.i

Stephen Chbosky

و ما أحد يخلد في البرايا..بل الدنيا تؤول إلى زوال.أبو الطيب المتنبي.
...........
May Allah bless you and reward you well
very good my friend i really appreciate your work
never let up

Black_Poison
2012-06-19, 10:32
really good poem i like it
but let me tell you something
friendship will never be over
if you lost a friend
you'll find another who makes you forget everything
when people leave is not always a bad thing
just like winter leaves to come spring