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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Now it's Gone


حكاية قلب
2011-11-28, 18:52
And finally it's Gone
it's the end
finally i'm breathing normally
living my dream comes alive
my dream that i dreamt everyday
saying i wish it comes true
and finally it did
and comes now true

but....
why i'm felling like i don't want this
i don't want it to end
now...why i'm crying
my tears are so hot on my checks

this feeling
tells me why did i do that
why did i wish you go
why

now you're gone
and letting me
crying
feeling gelty
feeling stupidly
dieing slowly
wishing everyday

that you were here...

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.
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My Pén
"shin hyun "

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-30, 17:07
wow....It's a mixture sadness and happiness
what i understand in the first line is that you
found something very interesing in your life
that attracted me....but when from But you
have written i mean the second part of your
writing i noticed that there is asadness why?
but when i continued reading your lines i concluded
that you don't want your dreams be over...
don't be sad put your happiness on
life carries on every thing carries on
nothing could hold on
Life is life laugh to life life laugh to you
as they have been saying
I just got confused about who is gone?
keep on writing that kind of mixing two
sentiments that makes your works imortel
Good luck Miss...

حكاية قلب
2011-11-30, 21:46
Thx for teeling me your opinion
i'm glad cause you did that

yes i've made this mix
on purpose
cause it's really what i felt

thx for your advice
i will smile as much as i can

^^
thank you
3>

sourire hili
2011-12-01, 18:35
very nice sister