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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : and again ... i 'm losing


حكاية قلب
2011-11-28, 14:42
This girl

that strong one
all the time keep smiling
laughing..
don't care about the others
she feels so cofident
she keeps moving on
she write her life as she want


cries...like a baby
like she didn't cried before
like she never gonna cry again

losing her heart
leaving a personalité
that all this time
she was carring on

she gave up
finally...
on a moment should
never giving up in


she lost
again
in moment
she stand up in it
vs the Destiny

.
.
.
By Me
.
.

ali gourgache
2011-11-28, 14:48
if i do understand the topic;i can say unfortunately w e do have so many girls like that..............i'm very gratefulfor you since you thought writing about them..........keep doing well and by the way if i misunderstood you please explain to me.................Good Luck

حكاية قلب
2011-11-28, 15:20
if i do understand the topic;i can say unfortunately w e do have so many girls like that..............i'm very gratefulfor you since you thought writing about them..........keep doing well and by the way if i misunderstood you please explain to me.................Good Luck



First thank you for your comment
yes i let my words kind of
a mystery....

cause i love writing without
making the real sense

yeah of course
i'd like...

in this words i'm talking
about my self
in case i lost my self confiedent
cause some blems happend to me
and i gave up in it
but i dindn't forget that i'm stronger
so this case
teach me a lot
of things i'll never redo it
.
.

ali gourgache
2011-11-29, 10:10
Now I understand.........i'm sorry i see it from another angle..........please sister don't let problems rule your life if can i say problems are the spice of life..........don't be very pessimistic in vewing life .........Never look back again they are just experiences........Sorry again because may be i was somehow hurtful...........Good Luck

حكاية قلب
2011-11-29, 12:41
Now I understand.........i'm sorry i see it from another angle..........please sister don't let problems rule your life if can i say problems are the spice of life..........don't be very pessimistic in vewing life .........Never look back again they are just experiences........Sorry again because may be i was somehow hurtful...........Good Luck

Never mind
as you said it was an experience
and i've learned so much more

thx for your comment
^.^

rock-girl46
2011-11-29, 18:26
well u have to know that i feel the same...so keep going...<3

حكاية قلب
2011-11-29, 19:34
well u have to know that i feel the same...so keep going...<3

Thank you Swééty
^^

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-30, 17:09
And I'm here to comment again
that's happening that life is full of suffering
you learn many things while struggling
what you need in life is keep husteling
sometimes you are a girl with no feeling
sometimes you're a girl with a deep feeling
"the life is an art with no earser to weap out"
we generally face two things in life...good experience
so as to thank our god.....bad experience to
Learn lessons...once you were strong and smile
you will be back to what you had just the same
smiling and happy with no more tears...
the life is no sweat no more without problems

حكاية قلب
2011-11-30, 22:14
And I'm here to comment again

AnD You 're So "WélCome Here
^__^

that's happening that life is full of suffering
you learn many things while struggling
what you need in life is keep husteling


Yeaah you're so right
We must believe in this words
so much...

sometimes you are a girl with no feeling
sometimes you're a girl with a deep feeling

and i'm 100%
AGree with You in This
=)

we generally face two things in life...good experience
so as to thank our god.....bad experience to
Learn lessons...once you were strong and smile
you will be back to what you had just the same


as i said
We Must Believe in This
First
and i am..
^^
smiling and happy with no more tears...
the life is no sweat no more without problems


yeah..and to be honest
the most favorite word to me
ever is
SMILE
cause all this pain
blems
tears
...
But i'll keep always My smile
this makes me feel So
Better
Like you told me Before
"Smile to life
Life will Smile to you"
^___^
=)

and finally thx
for your comment AGAIN

.....
you made me smile AGAIN
=)

sourire hili
2011-12-01, 18:29
what can I say,master writer just keep on writeen because when I read your poam I just want to read more and more

حكاية قلب
2011-12-01, 20:54
what can I say,master writer just keep on writeen because when I read your poam I just want to read more and more

thank you sis
for this encouraging words
i'll write inshall'ah more poems

thank you
^.^