to my BLEEDING heart

[حكاية قلب]

.
.
.

why i believed my innocence to feel
great what ever happend
now i'm making my tears and feel
so much pain..

where are you my friend
it was the last time we
met and set..

talking ..laughing...and dreaming
since so long time
i've so much things to tell

so much feeling to share
you stood there in front of me
just ..close enough to loose you

please my heart
i just want no more pain
no more night set
no more stupid get
no more tears
no more gilty felt

please draw my way so i can forget
leave me thinking to breathe again
and no more "it was.."
will play in my mind..

i'll walk away and make time
doing his job
try to make me finally
.
.
.
Forget






please tell me guys....
how did you find it ?

^_^

[حكاية قلب]

12 Vu
00 Commen
!!!!!!!!!

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

so great Girl that's good and I liked your rhyming and well chosen words depicting your situation....

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

keep doing like that and develop what you want....the key is reading free styles of poetry...so you can grab something new...okey i will bring you a poetry aboiut friendship it is of mine ...peace up!!!

[حكاية قلب]

Thank you brother for this comment it's so nice from you to say that...
yeah i'll keep show you my writing inshallah
and i'm waiting for yours too
^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

yeah....if you want to see my writing visit my topics i've many poems it's better to read them they are so good i garantee you will like them

[حكاية قلب]

yeah i've done
i liked them so much
you've a gift

keep on writing you will
feel so much batter

god bless you

peace
^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Friends of mine all are gone
they left me alone so the pain is done
yes i'm living lonely on my own
hey i gave you my heart' crown
my heart to you was always open
who can stand next to me and listen
deceivig in these world always happen
It was the thing that make me frighten
with you friend I used to be fine
I give you one more chance to combine
I'm waiting for you, forgiveness is my sign






hey this is for you Girl I wrote it yessterday tell me if you like it okey

[حكاية قلب]

Friends of mine all are gone
they left me alone so the pain is done
yes i'm living lonely on my own
hey i gave you my heart' crown
my heart to you was always open
who can stand next to me and listen
deceivig in these world always happen
It was the thing that make me frighten
with you friend I used to be fine
I give you one more chance to combine
I'm waiting for you, forgiveness is my sign






hey this is for you Girl I wrote it yessterday tell me if you like it okey

I Adore It
Realy Realy
Like it...
No...

Love it

it's so so so
sweet from You thank you
it's lovely
thx
^.^

[حكاية قلب]

and i also wrote this for you
.
.
i know it's not beatiful as yours but
i tried
=)


My Life
.
.
.
need a few time to realize
a few minutes to describe
an acking heart
yeah...i guess it's mine!

hello i'm speaking
nobady's hearing
but..never mind people
i'll always keep saying

Now feeling so much pain
but don't worry
easy to healing
don't try to put me down
cause i'll never give up on my own
strong enough to fix it
lonely but not alone

everybody is screaming
need to dreaming
writing silently
feeling perfectly
creating dreams
building ways

the way i think
nobady's get
simple ideas
but difficult to mestand

this is my life
so please don't come
i'm on my own
feel so much calme
dreaming,hoping,loving
doing what ever i want

i don't need your help
cause i know that i'm strong enough
to stand up again
without any hand
catch me then say
hey dud you remeber
i'm the one who made you
breathe again

oh come-on people
don't fool me more
cause i know some of you
don't know me at all
and for them i'll say
don't try to do
cause you'll wish
never know me
before this time

now i'm letting you go
cause i won't give you
more then that face
to preuve anything
exept my view

.
.

i Don't know if i went there
i mean your life
but i knew you from the way
you wrote
not all
but some

so....

how it is ?

^.^

[MATRIX-DZ]

I just wanted to inform you about the title

I think there's a little mistake

BLEADING

Bleeding

[حكاية قلب]

I just wanted to inform you about the title

I think there's a little mistake

BLEADING

Bleeding

thx bro
i 'll try to fix it
^^

[حكاية قلب]

Thanks
for your comment

^_^

[sourire hili]

it's just great brother I wish you all the best

[حكاية قلب]

it's just great brother I wish you all the best

first thx for ur comment
2nd i didn't know if you talkin' to me or....
But i want to notice u that i'm girl

and thank you aGain

^^'