Ashore !!

[Big SmaiL]

Ashore , I walk aside , near the vast sea ; this espect is marvelous ; quiet and soft ,,, when J was here ;; I state you , but I don't meet you about me I search , I search properly ashore .. the corals , the pearls .. but you?? I assume for calm , for aplomb but behind this art a big sole , a small girl want to eyesight tou ; she move her eyelash slowly for remember your photoes
هذا جزء فقط ... و لغتي الانجليزية غير جيدة ..
ما رأيكم؟؟؟
مستعدة للنقد ... فلي رغبه ملحة في تلعم الانجليزية ....

[Big SmaiL]

معقولة واحد ما حب يعاونني ؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟؟
ما طلبت والو .. مجرد حافز و متابعة للكلمات و النحو والغملاء في كتاباتي .. حابة نتعللللللم

[newflower]

hi my friend i can correct you mistakes, is it ok with you? if so tell m

[Big SmaiL]

of course
thanks
so ; I do finish? or don't yet?

[newflower]

Ashore , I walked aside , near the vast sea ; this marvelous view ; quiet and soft ,,, when I was there ;; I felt you , but I did not meet you . I searched in every corner .. the corals , the pearls .. but you did not show??
I m lookig for tranquility, behind this art a big sole. ,

hope that benefit you.some advice..1)keep the same tense
2) use simple verbs and each time use synonimes3) dont stop writing4) God bless you

[newflower]

ok i m ready for more if you want correction or any help

[Big SmaiL]

thanks ,,,
see you tomorow إن شاء الله

[newflower]

hi my friend i add new topic you can consolt and give me your views.plz dot hesitate

[Big SmaiL]

I 'm sorry Ihave to prepare for the examats ::::
see you after there :