المساعد الشخصي الرقمي

مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : Soldier son of a people


Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-03, 11:16
God bless Algerian Soldiers

This is for the sons of my country the real men, those who suffered from pain, cold, stay sleepless to save, defend and destroy while others were safe and far from the hard point, who comfort their families, mothers are sad of what their sons had had they will be paid for what they made for their country, religion,


I'm a dead soldier i died on my knees
what i did what i got still rehearse
who am I a soldier or son of people
still young but a black minded at all
first who am I, I'm from the clothes I dress
"Superficially"I a man of war a wall of defense
look inside me I'm just like you i've an ability
i've heart i've feeling i've a wife i've a family
i've friends i've children all of them I'm missing
I lived suffering then i became struggling
fighting every day "force" the enemy to pay
like the heros who "tarada' french colonizer away
we the sons of the people we are the law
so when battle came what we do is to blow
we never fear and we have no fear except the GOD
the fight,Honor ,Pride, strenght,loyalty run in our blood
when we enter in we make the enemy chilling
waiting for nothing but defeat is the meaning
about the flag about the Honor " we are existed
so i'm a dead soldier and this is how it started
Fast to the resemblement we were invited
they claimed something should be regulated
secret orders from the hight authority
Ready to die to get the stability
The master chief is comming shouting
Every soldier every human being keep listening
There would be a battle and we were convene
We all kept acting like a machine
No words no talks the silent is the master
Now the captain is saying words to consider
Now where we are going is clear you Memorize
Place were enemy as a germs and you Sterilize
Victims should be, so just remaind
Staying alive could be, open your maind
With courage you should be provided
By Your arm you will be guided
A real combat and nothing fake, and risks it takes

Everything is true, buletts are true, Bombs are true
Arms are true, death is true a false dam is true
You have to Left the fear behind,bring the sense of fight
So you are here to make the clear day a dark night
-----------------------To be continued--------------------
-------------------------------Part one--------------------------------

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-03, 19:34
Every body watch this if you're an algerian to the bone and you are patriot just type any word you like

ilina 07
2011-11-04, 18:29
i wasn't wrong when i said i 'll like it because i loove it ..and just like you said god bless our brave soldiers ... thank you again for your amazing words

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-05, 12:22
Thank you Helena you're appreciated for your comments.........that was part one of my poem look for the part two and three soon okey

ilina 07
2011-11-05, 17:02
okey no problem ...thank you again for your great poems

حكاية قلب
2011-11-28, 14:17
i've read the second one before
but i'll reread it again
for understanding well

it's so nice words you used

i'm waitin' for the
rest of it

peace

^^

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-28, 19:00
yeah There is another part i mean the part 3....so i'm looking for your comments ha

حكاية قلب
2011-11-28, 21:18
yeah..
don't worry
i'll comment inshallah

thx
^^

Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-11-30, 17:35
hey you know something people around here...I just concluded that there are just afew persons here who like Algeria and who can make a war where something bad will happen to our country ....because if you can't read something like this and encourage its writer nothing easy more than these so my words to thoise who comments on my writing and poems you're ap^preciated and you deserve to be my peers and everything you want ....those who just read and understand but can't comment simply I don't like your behaviours it's not honnest believe me? that's my thoughs and that's my rear view...if you don't like it write to me if you don't understand it tell me ...if You don't like my poems I will move them but when pigs fly....I demanded a hard critics to critisize me...you don't want to....I demanded to give me your views hahahah you didn't so if it doesn't suit you Go to hell and io'm just right here to those who want to critisize me bring any one you can rely on...bring any thing i told you 3uuuuuuuuh

حكاية قلب
2011-11-30, 22:35
Don't Worry Kariim
Never Mind to this people
let them do whatever they want
don't give them a face
they don't deserve
and you know that

i'm sure
just let them



and i'm here to
critisize your

^.^
You
Just
Smile

=))