Karim_Rap_4_life
2011-10-31, 10:50
Hello every body every one in here i wish you're doing good
this is my favorite poem that I wrote, the fact that is the truth nothing Imaginary it is a real story so I'm looking for your reviews___Critics too if you feel something bad for the *******s or the way i wrote it the way I put the rhymes, Coherent any thing that seems too bad or unappropreate, just type it you're welcome, I'm looking for hard critics you're welcome every body, but don't forget your justification those who want to criticise need the proof_ whatever I wish you like it is from a heart no more lies.
"To the Cannibal Girl who bit my heart"
Hey common what's up You know I can't give up
Even if I got stroke up I was not born to flop
Call it what you think it is, for me love is a disease
I was serious so nothing made the pain to appease
I got affections like a mob on the door
I was Number one on the love floor
I used to be on the top of the score
Love what's love get away you poor
You have any idea you don't know what it does mean?
What? I can't understand what are you saying Karim?
Of course it is your response
It is like a charge of offense
Follow me I will show and you will decide
That's real I have nothing to hide
That's my experience may be will stick for many years
It was clear that the Truth were my Wears
I was afraid to be back to what I had
I lost my lonliness it was my best friend
Acting like a soldier did not want to retreat
The love enemy could lead me to the defeat
I gave you what you need but you did cheat
What you did is loyalty you exhibited
But that thing you meant never existed
You knew that to you I was addicted
You guessed I wouldn't from you i got played
But now my love to you is out of use, it's expired
My heart was lost but by my mind got inspired
I don't want to negociate now you're who I really hate
Just go look for another mate don't hesitate
I've no sentiments, I've nothing more for you
The world is full of liars similars to you
You are looking for an interview
Self esteem you have is so few
I guarantee that you're not my cup of tea
If i continued I would be supposed that I exaggerated
Simply I want to say that my love to you, was evaporated
you can consider that to me you never existed
The memories we lived, from my brain are deleted
What I'm expecting is your distiny full of suffering
You were the point of my devastating
You are going to travel through the corruption
So I give you the ticket as a reaction
I wish the bad for you Lady, Attention!
I just want to say Congratulation
That's the final words of my conclusion
you're number one pretender of delusion
yeah Cannibal girl, Animal feel better than you
Yeah Cannibal Girl a lot of them there is a lot
Too much bad too much harmful yeah solitude is good
expect the deep poems of mine wait for them words like weapon phrases like chemical bombs .
:mh92:
this is my favorite poem that I wrote, the fact that is the truth nothing Imaginary it is a real story so I'm looking for your reviews___Critics too if you feel something bad for the *******s or the way i wrote it the way I put the rhymes, Coherent any thing that seems too bad or unappropreate, just type it you're welcome, I'm looking for hard critics you're welcome every body, but don't forget your justification those who want to criticise need the proof_ whatever I wish you like it is from a heart no more lies.
"To the Cannibal Girl who bit my heart"
Hey common what's up You know I can't give up
Even if I got stroke up I was not born to flop
Call it what you think it is, for me love is a disease
I was serious so nothing made the pain to appease
I got affections like a mob on the door
I was Number one on the love floor
I used to be on the top of the score
Love what's love get away you poor
You have any idea you don't know what it does mean?
What? I can't understand what are you saying Karim?
Of course it is your response
It is like a charge of offense
Follow me I will show and you will decide
That's real I have nothing to hide
That's my experience may be will stick for many years
It was clear that the Truth were my Wears
I was afraid to be back to what I had
I lost my lonliness it was my best friend
Acting like a soldier did not want to retreat
The love enemy could lead me to the defeat
I gave you what you need but you did cheat
What you did is loyalty you exhibited
But that thing you meant never existed
You knew that to you I was addicted
You guessed I wouldn't from you i got played
But now my love to you is out of use, it's expired
My heart was lost but by my mind got inspired
I don't want to negociate now you're who I really hate
Just go look for another mate don't hesitate
I've no sentiments, I've nothing more for you
The world is full of liars similars to you
You are looking for an interview
Self esteem you have is so few
I guarantee that you're not my cup of tea
If i continued I would be supposed that I exaggerated
Simply I want to say that my love to you, was evaporated
you can consider that to me you never existed
The memories we lived, from my brain are deleted
What I'm expecting is your distiny full of suffering
You were the point of my devastating
You are going to travel through the corruption
So I give you the ticket as a reaction
I wish the bad for you Lady, Attention!
I just want to say Congratulation
That's the final words of my conclusion
you're number one pretender of delusion
yeah Cannibal girl, Animal feel better than you
Yeah Cannibal Girl a lot of them there is a lot
Too much bad too much harmful yeah solitude is good
expect the deep poems of mine wait for them words like weapon phrases like chemical bombs .
:mh92: