Mr Lonely

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

عذرا لقد أقلعت عن كتابة هدا النوع من القصائد

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Hi common every body I'm looking for your comments ayo Hurry up!!!!

[7rima david]

do u know that if she love u truly she'll be with u even u are apart
by the way nice poem , u are so sunsitive

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

you're alright for the fact that I'm sensitive but those who discover that you are sensitive will exploit that fact to make you suffer..........thank you for your opininion and comment thank you ha

[ilina 07]

amazing poem waw you are really sensetive and deep

[خدووجة]

great poem , nice thoughts ..i really like it

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Thank you for passing another chance

[sourire hili]

nice poem brother

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

nice poem brother
Thqnk you sis

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

any body else

[noor al houda]

really deep words and sensitive poem like it..................

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Thank you Girl

[newsk]

my bro , hold on , if she really loved you , u'll always feel like she is just inside you
u r sensitive , its okey , but my advice , keep it inside you , dont show it , u'll get hurt from people dont deserve you
keep it for your real wife ..
Yeep , nice poem dear

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

yeah brother thank you and well words from you........My matters is how i feel i tell what i want .....I don't want to keep it inside me because when you have no body with you you better get it out of your chest for the people who are going to hurt I have self confident and who want to hurt he can do that I'm ready for whatever

[ali gourgache]

i feel like i'm inside your heart since i felt that the poem is from the bottom of your heart..........i feel that you are innocent in a way ...please don't let your emotions drive you for a vague world..........i really get admired by the poem .....keep doing well and i hope that you've got me well....Good Luck

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

i feel like i'm inside your heart since i felt that the poem is from the bottom of your heart..........i feel that you are innocent in a way ...please don't let your emotions drive you for a vague world..........i really get admired by the poem .....keep doing well and i hope that you've got me well....Good Luck
yeah man thank you you're so appreciated...you know sometimes you have to write and talk to others tyo avoid your pain but it is not the task that make me loose my personality....the world is nothing for me I like my brothers and sisters as the ones here in the djelfa forum...they are a good persons......because of that i publish these kinds of my writings........the real man here is the one who love by his heart but contributing his brain....because nothing good without the balance of the heart and brain.....so thank you agiang brother you're so good persons .

[حكاية قلب]

yaaay
i looooved it
it so so so sweet cute poem
i like this kind of poems

keep on writing it
i'll be waiting

^^
ThanK You
3>

[maymay]

I m starting to discover different sides in your writings,I ll keep my comment for a later time

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

I m starting to discover different sides in your writings,I ll keep my comment for a later time

hhh yeah you are welcome...I just want to inform you that I write three kinds of poems
1_Love poems but rarely
2_Social poems and problems
3_Gangsta Life

but I love to write social ones

[maymay]

hhh yeah you are welcome...I just want to inform you that I write three kinds of poems
1_Love poems but rarely
2_Social poems and problems
3_Gangsta Life

but I love to write social ones
g r e a t

[dahmane78]

il y a vraiment une variation dans vos poèmes entre la romantique et la révolte

[سارة1995]

]It's amazing and wonderful poem

[ابتساام]

wow it's great
i can feel:
you are very sad but don't worry every thing will change

[ابتساام]

yeah man thank you you're so appreciated...you know sometimes you have to write and talk to others tyo avoid your pain but it is not the task that make me loose my personality....the world is nothing for me i like my brothers and sisters as the ones here in the djelfa forum...they are a good persons......because of that i publish these kinds of my writings........the real man here is the one who love by his heart but contributing his brain....because nothing good without the balance of the heart and brain.....so thank you agiang brother you're so good persons .

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[Black_Poison]

nice poem as allways
i wrote apoem like that
with the same idea
except for the volcano
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[Karim_Rap_4_life]

nice poem as allways
i wrote apoem like that
with the same idea
except for the volcano
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I've the pleasure to read it maybe we'll mix them who knows hhhhhh

[the fly boy]

I'll reply
soon

[.kiki]

you really can express yourself in a verygood way.. you have talent..
you need a little work.. but you're good
I like it
!so thnx !

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

I'll reply
soon




Yeah I'll be waiting for your reply bro

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

you really can express yourself in a verygood way.. you have talent..
you need a little work.. but you're good
I like it
!so thnx !


you're welcome and thank you or passing actually i'm planning to make a little work but not soon hhh thank you