They wanna know?

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Why they always ask and blame me
What they want from me
Why they are against me,
They want what I have inside
She is my dreariest person, she has the mansion’s keys of my heart
So please Let me love my lover
Don’t ask me why? From the east side to the west side I will not find that eyes
My love toward her couldn’t be measured
My heart is cleaned and cleared she is the one to be accepted and stay in my life
Until the end of time, until my last breath
Until when I say my last words, I’m against the world against all odds
Until the lights of my life goes on
I say what I say and I can’t stay
Without her I turned to a monster, gangster
They will be the losers I’m a hustler
Cause this is the life of a stranger
Strictly for my lover I could be a murderer

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

what's your comments friends i'm waiting for your opinions to see if i can carry on it mean to keep going on the level or come back to the zero point

[lovely friend]

hello bro god bless u for ur words
it's so deep, romantic and honest
really it's rare to find a real love these days
keep going like that with ur amazing poems
regards

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

thank's a lot , your writing is so good too but there is somethign you should know which is the rhyme, the rhymes are many types for exemple we have Masculine or strong rhyme.....weak or feminine rhyme.......internal rhyme, eye rhyme or sight rhyme....we have also final rhyme, perfect rhyme so all these you should know they are beneficial to write a good poem with similes and ****phors etc

[جرف اسامة]

well chosen words

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Thanks a lot friends

[angel.rose]

wOw .......keep going like that with ur amazing poems
+++i like it +++++

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

Thank you for your supporting

[ilina 07]

again another wonderful and deep poem... keep on going with your beautiful poems

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

There are too many poems i have not established the fact that I'm looking for strong words I mean I'm searchign for the approproiate cause I write when I'm studying When I'm in work or any place I go I grab a little copybook and write any idea i think about so soon my poems are comming to you hahah wait for the best and deeper words than the previous just be present to criticise and comment okey

[ilina 07]

okey no problem i 'll wait for better and deeper poems and i promise to comment ..thank you for all your hard working

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

you're appreciated see the new one I wrote it is titled "a kannibal girl"

[حكاية قلب]

The most thing
i love about your poems
that there're so special
you have a way of
looking to things so honest

you have so strong personality

god bless you
congatulations
^^

By the way this is the most poem i love
the kind of words i like more
^^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

you're appreciated Girl.....it's the same to my thoughts i like these kinds of writing the fact only the real facts no more lies

[حكاية قلب]

Thank You
Yeah and that's what i love to think
when it come to my pen

Nothing but the truth

^_^

[Karim_Rap_4_life]

they uwalk the walk talk the talk.......but for me I talk what I want to talk and i walk wherever I want to walk....that's the reality

[حكاية قلب]

they uwalk the walk talk the talk.......but for me I talk what I want to talk and i walk wherever I want to walk....that's the reality

Good words
i loved it
^.^