wish you are here

[noor al houda]

i can't be strong
i can't be cool
but with you
i am not that at all
all the sweet things you said
you left it stuck in my head
you were always here
and every were
but now you left me alone
diem..diem.....diem
what i have to do here here here
diem..diem.....diem
i wish you are near near near
diem..diem.....diem
i miss you so mush my dear dear dear
but...
i will never let you go
no...
i am alone.........
you left me pain........
so not fear........
diem..diem.....diem
but i hate you now
cause you don't deserve my love.....
you don't deserve my pain
you don't deserve any thing....:confused:

[noor al houda]

that my poem i hope that you like it...................wait for your comments.............

[ALGeRieN BoY]

I do really like this pretty poem
but
with my respects to your work
don't ya think that it is a song lyrics more than a poem
my point is that when somebody sing it or u sing it
it would be nicer
and it would be a really nice song
thank you

[noor al houda]

i respect your opinion thank you very much and you are right this is lyrics not poem...........

[أميرة العرب]

hi this is :
Members writings

and this is a song of avril lavigne

so take it to the right place


thx