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مشاهدة النسخة كاملة : my teather


asmaa zaida
2011-08-05, 11:58
the title is:my teather
you are the light of my way
you are the cause of my happeness in my day
the good way you show and the best provorbs you
***say
you are the angel of my life so stay
you make me happy when skies are grey
you are relly as good mother
every body needs your gentel manners
a day i'm shure will meet to gether
and always our days i remember
byyyyyyyyy i love you misses
ارجوا ان ينال اعجابكم ولا تدخلو لتقراوه فقط

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spy4me
2011-08-05, 12:06
that's good asmaa when you express your feeling through a poem
i like the meanings but you should be careful about the writing errors
thank you "c joli

nadia1
2011-08-07, 18:34
nice poem keep it on