You're a lier

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This's my second poem ... I hope you a good time with these modest words

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how

I believed your sensible words
I really hate you now

Between us there’s a daughter
That makes me inevitably suffer

?She will ask where’s my father
I’m sure you’ve no answer

I’ll fight in the desert
But I need amount of water

I hate you too much
You hear me and watch

You like what’s happening with me
Ahh… I’ll throw myself in the sea

You’re more than lier
You deserve a hot fire

Bye my lovely daughter
Bye…bye forever




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?Where are the comments

[azhar15]

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how
i realy like ur poem
good words

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We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how
i realy like ur poem
good words

Thank you .... I'm in seventh heaven

[sarouna22]

We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how

I believed your sensible words
I really hate you now

nice words

[medjedel67]

ur words really touched me
thx

[that's me]

:)big words ! carry on
u have the spirit of a poet

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ur words really touched me
thx

This's my principal aim

You're welcome

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:)big words ! carry on
u have the spirit of a poet


hhhhhhhhhh I didn't know that :rolleyes: thank you

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We’ve no thing to talk about
?You lied to me …but how

I believed your sensible words
I really hate you now

nice words


Thank you a lot

[ميناء السلام]

رائعععععععععععععععععععععععععععععع واصل

[نعمة القدوس]

Hi friend


I really like this poem

cuZz you'll gettin better by the time

It's better than the old one


Cary on


وععععع

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Hi friend


I really like this poem

cuZz you'll gettin better by the time

It's better than the old one


Cary on


وععععع

بعووووووووووووووووووووووووووووو

I've waited this comment for long time

Thank you

[نعمة القدوس]

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Just to not say that I don't keep my word


الترجمة :

برك باه ماتقولش نعمة ماعندهاش كلمة

[saya2011]

wow it's very good poem
I hope to continue like that
thank you

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wow it's very good poem
I hope to continue like that
thank you

Insha Allah thank you

[bouti999]

exslent sister all the best

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exslent sister all the best


Thanks but I'm a brother

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[❀عنْفُوَاפּ طُمُوحْ❀]

really strong word

this is real story or not

because it's full of detest

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I only imagined the feelings of the detest

Thanks for your nice comment

[❀عنْفُوَاפּ طُمُوحْ❀]

ok sister

very nice poem

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ok sister

very nice poem

I'm a brother

[the sad girl]

wow I liked those strong words .carry on

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wow I liked those strong words .carry on

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

[noor al houda]

is that real story??? you are so good care on....

[فلة أمينة]

thank you it's beautiful keep up the good work

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Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuu

[lovely friend]

you're more than a lier
you deserve a hot fire
god bless you sis for your honest words
i like ur poem
great topic

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you're more than a lier
you deserve a hot fire
god bless you sis for your honest words
i like ur poem
great topic

ThankS sister but I'm brother

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[العالم الافتراضي]

Where are you ?

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I'm here .............

[سارة1995]

MashALLAH !!!!
Really amazing and more than amazing
I like it in a crazy way ^^ It is awesome
Keep it Up , You will have a perfect future
GOD Bless You

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[rola.29]

oh .. nice words ...sad story :1: it's wonderful
keeeeep writing

[amel nina]

that's awonderful poem
it really amazed me
keep going

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Thanks

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